Little Mouse
Trick or Treat81 total reviews
Comment from elgone
Kids are too cute when they are dressed up for Halloween. I think I miss that most about my kids being grown-up. I need to wait for them to have kids of their own, I guess.
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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Kids are too cute when they are dressed up for Halloween. I think I miss that most about my kids being grown-up. I need to wait for them to have kids of their own, I guess.
E
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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I completely enjoy my grandchildren and since I had all boys I really enjoy the granddaughters and my daughter-in-laws.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I have to say this, she did make a cute mouse. I liked the rhyming and the style of this. The imagery was great. I liked the child like wonder in this. nicely done.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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I have to say this, she did make a cute mouse. I liked the rhyming and the style of this. The imagery was great. I liked the child like wonder in this. nicely done.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
I see you are being affected by your grandchildren too. Move over, Brooke. (lol) This is very well written with a cute rhyming scheme.
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I see you are being affected by your grandchildren too. Move over, Brooke. (lol) This is very well written with a cute rhyming scheme.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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I think Sawyer and I are working something out with Kinley. Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Barb what cute poem with fun rhyme
So Grandma has a friendly and such a cute mouse to play with and to love
Thank you for sharing such an adorable poem
Gert
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Hi Barb what cute poem with fun rhyme
So Grandma has a friendly and such a cute mouse to play with and to love
Thank you for sharing such an adorable poem
Gert
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. This little lady is soooo precious. She can do no wrong in my eyes.
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I know what you mean
Gert
Comment from lindalcreel
I know that she's dressed like a little mouse, but she looks like an angel to me. I have four granddaughters and their personalities are as different as night and day. She's picture perfect and I know that her grandmother will take good care of her. Thanks so much for sharing. This made me smile.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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I know that she's dressed like a little mouse, but she looks like an angel to me. I have four granddaughters and their personalities are as different as night and day. She's picture perfect and I know that her grandmother will take good care of her. Thanks so much for sharing. This made me smile.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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I can't imagine a cuter little angel. Thank you for the kind review.
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So welcome:)
Comment from Cajungirl
How beautiful a poem you have written. It is so fitting of the beautiful baby girl. I enjoyed the read. Your poem flowed very well. The picture of the baby, priceless.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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How beautiful a poem you have written. It is so fitting of the beautiful baby girl. I enjoyed the read. Your poem flowed very well. The picture of the baby, priceless.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
That is an adorable picture. Certainly worth a poem. This is cute and appealing. Clever AABB rhyme. Trust the cat not to pay any attention to the obviously fake mouse. The pup, on the other hand, is ready to play! Enjoyed the ending with the little mouse saying she's a kissing bug, whereupon she gets a kiss from Grandma. This is a treat! judi
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That is an adorable picture. Certainly worth a poem. This is cute and appealing. Clever AABB rhyme. Trust the cat not to pay any attention to the obviously fake mouse. The pup, on the other hand, is ready to play! Enjoyed the ending with the little mouse saying she's a kissing bug, whereupon she gets a kiss from Grandma. This is a treat! judi
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're so welcome. What a darling little one. judi
Comment from BethShelby
She is adorable. The mouse costume is precious. Your poem is delightful as well. It is perfectly suited for the trick or treat holiday. It makes me wish my grandchildren were still little.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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She is adorable. The mouse costume is precious. Your poem is delightful as well. It is perfectly suited for the trick or treat holiday. It makes me wish my grandchildren were still little.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from TKField
On three.....awwwwww.
What a charming, cute costume. Mouse in house, got hug, cat shrug, waited, got irated. Say, wanna play? Bowed head she said, bug, hug, no critique on kissed cheek.
This was a really sweet poem that I'm sure will be a big hit with the drooling in their gruel crowd, as well we old fogies who just drool everywhere.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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On three.....awwwwww.
What a charming, cute costume. Mouse in house, got hug, cat shrug, waited, got irated. Say, wanna play? Bowed head she said, bug, hug, no critique on kissed cheek.
This was a really sweet poem that I'm sure will be a big hit with the drooling in their gruel crowd, as well we old fogies who just drool everywhere.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from emrpoems
quatrains with aabb rhymes.
The perfect picture for this poem.
I just wanta play
Mouse, what do you say?"
She bowed her head
With a tear she said,
"Grandma, 'bout that hug
I'm a kissing bug."
Without a critique
Grandma kissed her cheek.
Ideal trick and treat idea
influenced by his photo.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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quatrains with aabb rhymes.
The perfect picture for this poem.
I just wanta play
Mouse, what do you say?"
She bowed her head
With a tear she said,
"Grandma, 'bout that hug
I'm a kissing bug."
Without a critique
Grandma kissed her cheek.
Ideal trick and treat idea
influenced by his photo.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. This little lady never has to ask for a hug or kiss from grandma.
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Thank you for the kind review. This little lady never has to ask for a hug or kiss from grandma.
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Thank you for the kind review. This little lady never has to ask for a hug or kiss from grandma.
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Thank you for the kind review. This little lady never has to ask for a hug or kiss from grandma.
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Thank you for the kind review. This little lady never has to ask for a hug or kiss from grandma.
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I can see that
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Thank you for the kind review. This little lady never has to ask for a hug or kiss from grandma.
