Comment from robina1978

Excellent

Lovely photo, the way you worked it. You also pictured Halloween well in your poem. Good rhyme and meter. You could have entered the contest with it.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013

Thank you Ine. I haven't done very well in contests.

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

An eye catching presentation and very effective format.
I'm amazed by yet another different format you have written
your poem in.
So much can be learnt from your command of the differing poetic forms.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013

Thank you Shirley. I appreciate the comments.

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

That sure is a scary picture. Good artwork. It's very creative of you to try out. Well thought out. Nicely written for the Halloween theme. Good rhythm. Good rhymes. Excellent work.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013

Thank you, Alicia, just trying out some photo lab features.

Comment from Preston McWhorter

Excellent

Hi, Trieschel,
This is an excellent poem with good flow, rhyme and rhyme scheme constantly followed. It has good figurative language and imagery.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013

Thanks again Preston.

Comment from marycec

Excellent

Love what you did with the photography to spook this up even more. Like the 6666syllable count - mark of the beast and some..! Great alliteration in 'gross greetings from grim ghouls'. Nice work.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013

Thank you Mary, I appreciate the depth of your appreciation.

Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER

Excellent

And L EA ve you clamorous, Love' clamorous'
At L EA st with uhs and ahs. 'l'and 'ea' allits

Those evils fate forbids 'f' allits
Are loosed forevermore. Quoth the raven

Gross greetings from grim ghouls, 'g' allits
As specters ride the sky, 's' "
Will frighten mortal fools 'f' "
Who trick or treat or die. "t' "

Ah Ha HA HA HAAaaaaa!!!! Lovely touch

Erll done.

Regards:

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013

Thank you very much Stephen.

Comment from joneau2

Excellent

Ha, a spooky Halloween poem in tune with the season. A super job bringing out the creepiness. I especially enjoyed that laughter at the end. Very well done. And, as far as I'm concerned, there's nothing simple about all those poem formats.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013

Thank you Joneau. Glad to get your input.