Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

haha. this is an amusing and light-hearted piece of poetic art dear sankey! i love the word peewee, it's like a double tinkle:)
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014

Hi rebekka thi sis as indicated the intro to my Book of Poultry hope you can have a look at the others rewards on em till Sunday arvo US time.

reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014

Hi rebekka thi sis as indicated the intro to my Book of Poultry hope you can have a look at the others rewards on em till Sunday arvo US time.

Comment from padumachitta

Excellent

Hi
A sweet poem. And now I know what a pee wee is:-)
It is a funny thing to wathc birds get annoyed by reflection and you have captured this well.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014

Thanks new friend. This is an intro to my Book of Poultry of weird, smelly quirky poems. Hope you can take the time to check the others out. Nice to meet another new friend. There will still be rewards for reviewing on this book till Sunday afternoon US time.

reply by padumachitta on 07-Dec-2014

Hi
I will try...but, i am so far behind becasue of the change of the site...it messed up my computer and I am only in the last day or so able to write reviews...so, let me try...thanks

reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014

If you look on the front page over on the left in a drop down,...there is the option to use to Classic version that is what a lot of us who prefer it are doing.

reply by padumachitta on 07-Dec-2014

Hi...yep, back to the classic..it is easier to deal with..I am a writer not a computer person. The new Site looks nice, but my old lap top just can't deal(even though my brouser gets a 471 rating)...but I tried and then my computer crashed...so it was not a fun time...oh well.Tom needs to update and the new page looks great. i hope it works for some.

reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014

Yeah a lot of us are more comfy with the old ha.

reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014

Yeah looks nice but I love this old Dinosaur Format.

reply by padumachitta on 07-Dec-2014

Me too!

Comment from ravim

Excellent

Call it 'poultry humor', this was real treat. Does this apply to all Australians (or all humans for that matter), I' not too sure! But your observation does bring to light, the vanity of life.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014

Thanks ravim not sure if we met before? Maybe you are right I changed the last word in the poem on the suggestion of another reviewer. This is an Intro to my Book of Poultry hope you will have a look at the others if you have time there is still rewards for reviewing on there till Sunday arvo US time I think. Some are smelly some are quirky or just weird. Hope you enjoy and thanks in advance.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Sankey, what a cute story this is...sweet little bird...he thinks he has a friend in the window pane...I love your poem...and the picture...very nicely written...luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014

Hi Linda appreciate the review this is the Intro for the first release of my "Book of Poultry" some quirky, some smelly some weird but there are rewards on all the poems but it runs out tomorrow US time I think. Hope you will have time to look at the others. Thanks again. (SOmeone suggested I change the last "him" I just did!

reply by l.raven on 06-Dec-2014

you are so welcome...I will go see...luff

Comment from st francis

Excellent

Lovely. I particularly enjoyed the surprise at end when I quickly realized he was competing with himself in the reflection. "There was this other familiar type..looking back at him.." What a silly vain birdie. Great rhyming, maybe limit to one "him" but very sweet poem. Well done. Blessings, Miriam

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014

Hi Miriam not sure if we met before. Appreciate the review. This is an Intro to a first release of my "Book of Poultry" with more of these quirky and some smelly and weird poems, if you have time for a look. Hoping therre is still some rewards on the others.

reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014

Hi new friend I changed the second him as you suggested have a look see if you like what I did.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Any animal, seeing an image of itself, will attempt to attack it. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014

Thanks mate. Not sure if I told ya this is the intro for the "Book of Poultry" some of which you may have seen before as Stand alones. Quirky, smelly and weird poems of mine. First release of the entire book as Tom said I can still add more if I want ha hope you will have a cruitse through em.

reply by c_lucas on 07-Dec-2014

Unfortunately, Geoff, my clock is ticking and I don't know how much longer I have. You're welcome. Charlie

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hah! Like a curious kitten looking into a mirror for the first time, 'ey, Geoff? Well, it has to be a far more entertaining show he puts on than most of the crap they put on the telly today, LOL.

Good stuff! 8-)

~Dean

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014

Right mate. This is the Intro to a first release of my entire "Book of Poultry" you may have seen some of the poems previously as stand alones but if you get time have a look through it.
Thanks for the review.

reply by Dean Kuch on 06-Dec-2014

Sure thing, geoff. Anytime, and I will try to check out more of those for ya.

~Dean

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

I have a window feeder on my kitchen window and often watch the birds eat their seed. Love your little peewee trying to eat. Excellent use of words and flow of lines makes this poem a delight to read.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014

Thanks new friend. Appreciate your great review. One of my FS friends gave me the idea of doing some stories on our other Aussie birds. As I get time. Hope you will have a look at the rest of the poems in my first release of "The Book of Poultry" this poem is the intro for it. Thanks again nice to meet new friends always.

Comment from Lost n Thought

Excellent

This is a great poem! I like that it tells a story, what an interesting bird! The rhymes are excellent and the presentation is lovely. A beautiful piece, great job!

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014

Thanks new friend. Not sure we have met before. Appreciate your great review. This is the Intro to my "Book of Poultry" Quirky, smelly, weird poems. Hope you will have a look at the others. A first release of the complete book of poems. I have another book of poems and stories and compositions as well. Unpublished yet of course.

Comment from barrieblakeway

Excellent

Thank you for your observation of this Peewee. I had always thought she (he) had lost its mate.
Now you cast another possibility into the thought-box. baz

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014

Hi friend. Think we have met before. Appreciate you coming by. This is the intro to my Book of Poultry. Some quirky, smelly weird poems if you have time to look at the others. Thanks for the great review have been encouraged to write about more of our Aussie birds as I get time.