Geoff's Book Of Poultry
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "The Vain Pee Wee"My Book Of Funny Poems and Stories.
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Comment from Brett Matthew West
Peewee unsure of its own reflection in the window's glass.
Wonder if the bird ever figured out it was seeing itself or just what eventually became of the strange criitter?-
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Peewee unsure of its own reflection in the window's glass.
Wonder if the bird ever figured out it was seeing itself or just what eventually became of the strange criitter?-
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Thanks for the lovely review mate. Haven't had any looking at themselves in the window lately.
Comment from CheyLGwriter
This was a very fun piece. He reminds me of Narcissus, the greek god who fell in love with his own reflection. It's great when a modern piece can take you another place and time. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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This was a very fun piece. He reminds me of Narcissus, the greek god who fell in love with his own reflection. It's great when a modern piece can take you another place and time. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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Thanks new friend. Not sure if any rewards are still going on the other poems in this collection hope you can have a look anyway. Appreciate your review.
Comment from tfawcus
It is fascinating the way birds do this, exerting their territorial rights. Not unlike humans in some respects! It is interesting that those things we attack most vigorously are often no more than reflections of ourselves. A nicely framed poem about the Peewee's vanity. An enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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It is fascinating the way birds do this, exerting their territorial rights. Not unlike humans in some respects! It is interesting that those things we attack most vigorously are often no more than reflections of ourselves. A nicely framed poem about the Peewee's vanity. An enjoyable read.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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Thanks very much I wonder if you are another new friend? I can't remember if I have seen your stuff before. This was the Intro to my First release of my "Book of Poultry" that I had rewards right through but I am guessing if you are in USA the rewards are just about run out on all the poems now. Appreciate your wonderful review. Hope to see you around some more.
Comment from Domino 2
Very sweet poem with a great fun surprise ending.
I bet he got frustrated, as the harder he pecked, the harder his 'adversary', pecked back.
I do the same thing after a few beers, though I haven't got a beak. ;-)
Nice one.
Cheers, Ray
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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Very sweet poem with a great fun surprise ending.
I bet he got frustrated, as the harder he pecked, the harder his 'adversary', pecked back.
I do the same thing after a few beers, though I haven't got a beak. ;-)
Nice one.
Cheers, Ray
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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Thanks Ray. Dunno where you are if in USA there are still rewards on the rest of this book till Sunday arvo US time maybe that is nearly up. Hope you can have a look at the other smelly, quirky, weird poems in this first release of my Book of Poultry. Not sure we have met before. Thanks anyway.
Comment from Nosha17
What a cute bird, my budgerigar used to do that in his little mirror, very vain. Well chosen words and rhymes to convey your thoughts. Enjoyable read. Faye
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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What a cute bird, my budgerigar used to do that in his little mirror, very vain. Well chosen words and rhymes to convey your thoughts. Enjoyable read. Faye
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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Hi Faye are you Aussie? I was asked to do some stories about some more of our Aussie birds. I have a small movie of a budgie sitting on a shaving mirror at my Dad's place looking at himself and pecking. Was gonna say if in US there are still rewards for a little longer on the rest of this Book of Poultry if you wanna have a look. Thanks again.
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You're welcome. No, I am English, but we love our budgerigars over here, I always kept them as pets when I was a child. Now, I am more a dog lover. Faye
Comment from Wendyanne
Lol how funny. It always makes me laugh when I see birds looking in mirrors or glass panes and not realising it's their reflection. Delightful!
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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Lol how funny. It always makes me laugh when I see birds looking in mirrors or glass panes and not realising it's their reflection. Delightful!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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Thanks for coming by. This is the Intro as above to my First release of my "Book of Poultry. Hope you can have a look at the other poems. Some smelly, quirky and weird. Not sure if still rewards on it.
Comment from misscookie
You captured my attention from the start.
This is a cute poem that made me smile.
Thank you for sharing.I like the artwork you chose for your poem
It really speaks for it else.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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You captured my attention from the start.
This is a cute poem that made me smile.
Thank you for sharing.I like the artwork you chose for your poem
It really speaks for it else.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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Thanks very much for coming by.That was a photo I took of the culprit or a relative hehe. As you would have noticed the poem is am Intro to the First release of my complete 'Book of Poultry' consisting of smelly quirky weird poems some from real life experiences as Occ Health and Safety Officer in my work before I retired. Thanks for coming by hope you get to look at the other poems with rewards still until Sunday arvo US time.
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Thanks very much for coming by.That was a photo I took of the culprit or a relative hehe. As you would have noticed the poem is am Intro to the First release of my complete 'Book of Poultry' consisting of smelly quirky weird poems some from real life experiences as Occ Health and Safety Officer in my work before I retired. Thanks for coming by hope you get to look at the other poems with rewards still until Sunday arvo US time.
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You're very welcome.
Have a blessed Sunday.
Until next time.
Cookie
Comment from Jackarrie
This is a lovely poem about the little Peewee, I had not heard about him before, I just love all birds I could watch them for hours. I enjoyed reading your well written poem.
Mary
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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This is a lovely poem about the little Peewee, I had not heard about him before, I just love all birds I could watch them for hours. I enjoyed reading your well written poem.
Mary
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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Hullo again here is see you came in and kept going. another FS friend wants me to write more on Aussie birds. I am planning on getting some pictures off some old Super 8 here and writing a story to go with them. Thanks for coming by.
Comment from Delahay
It can be so funny to see a bird trying to pick a fight with his reflection. They try and try to get that other bird to come out and fight fair but they never will.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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It can be so funny to see a bird trying to pick a fight with his reflection. They try and try to get that other bird to come out and fight fair but they never will.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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Hi friend as it says above this it=s the intro to my Book of Poultry some smelly some weird some quirky hope you get a chance to check them out still rewards on till Sunday arvo US time. Thanks for your review.
Comment from Zue65
I enjoyed the poem, the simplicity, the joy, the humor intended is clearly felt by the readers. The bird's confusion or perhaps love of the self, whichever it is, made the readers guessing and it made your poem more interesting. God bless.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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I enjoyed the poem, the simplicity, the joy, the humor intended is clearly felt by the readers. The bird's confusion or perhaps love of the self, whichever it is, made the readers guessing and it made your poem more interesting. God bless.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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Thanks friend God Bless you too. This is the Intro to my Book of Poultry as indicated so there are more smelly quirky weird poems in the book if you care to check them out.
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Thanks friend God Bless you too. This is the Intro to my Book of Poultry as indicated so there are more smelly quirky weird poems in the book if you care to check them out.
