Comment from cheyennewy

Excellent

Hi t,

This is so funny that I can't stop reading it. Actually I do the same, I drink a glass of wine before bedtime. It's my doctor's fault as he said I should drink red wine...so I do and I enjoy it way too much (grin) I wish I had one more six for you. TOO FUNNY! chey

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013

Thanks for your read, gracious support, nice comments and
personal remarks. Sweet or dry?:) t

reply by cheyennewy on 25-Oct-2013

merlot, which ever that one is!

reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013

It's alright, but Verde (rasberry) is sweeter! t

reply by cheyennewy on 25-Oct-2013

guess I should try it!

reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013

When you do...I want a full report! :)

reply by cheyennewy on 25-Oct-2013

okey dokey...will it make me drunk??

reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013

Not if taken in moderation!

reply by cheyennewy on 25-Oct-2013

Well dang! Where's the fun in that???

reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013

Have you had a nip or two already...it's not
bedtime.............YET!

reply by cheyennewy on 25-Oct-2013

it must be bedtime somewhere...grin

Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER

Excellent

I only drink on
those days ending with a "Y" Very funny or sad maybe
where is the problem

Any excuse to get drunk ...The 'Happy Hour' personified.
A lonely solitary drinker perhaps? In any event well composed. Meets all strictures.

Regards:

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013

Thanks for your read, shared sentiments, gracious comments and
personal remarks. Your response of affirmatiom is appreciated.

reply by STEPHEN A CARTER on 25-Oct-2013

Dear teafor2: Well deserved. Just posted 2 more short poems on America. Goal is 100. Thanks.

With Respect: Steve C

Comment from dennis0530

Excellent

I'll give "W's" for this. Why, Where? and with Who?

I believe there is no problem with this as long as what you drink ends in "OL" and not ""cide." I'll drink to the meaningful 3 lines.

However, I can see where the problem is. I assumed you have a drinking problem. But how you dress on your drinking days creates a difficulty. It is not easy to sip from a glass when you face is covered by a shawl.

I hope I catch the humor - again, I'll drink to that.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013

Thanks for your read, shared details, candid/cryptic comments and personal remarks. No, I don't have a drinking problem myself, but I recently had a "near beer" while serving as a designated driver. :)

Comment from ann marie mazz

Excellent

hello

isn't it fascinating how one entry can inspire another
I have just read the other entry

your format is in true count and form
the theme speaks for itself
the presentation well illustrated
the words are clever and clearly stated
the message has been received

thank you for sharing
drinking is a disease and not a weakness
but the fact remains there is a problem
it takes over the person

enjoy the afternoon
ann marie

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013

Thanks for your read, shared sentiments, sage comments and
personal remarks. Your response is an affirmation and
appreciated. teafor2

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
It uses the kind of satiric humor I expect from the senryu form
I like the use of question that engages the reader
Brooke

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 Comment Written 25-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013

Thanks for your read, shared sentiments, gracious comments and
personal remarks. teafor2