God Creates Breasts' Beauty!
God Creates beauty of female breasts purposefully154 total reviews
Comment from RFL
Hi Al, I haven't read your work in a while and am happy to see this piece, which I call, "Ode to Women". Just a thought. I really love this work; a man giving praise to women, especially those parts of her that nourish the next generation. Kudos to you.
Can I make a couple of suggestions? In the first paragraph you include "feminine gender". That is so scientific/academic/cold. Yet, your piece is loving and tender. Might I suggest that you include one of the following phrases instead: ". . . with visible breasts' beauty; the supreme nurturing gift"; or something like that. My point is to take the academic terms out of this lovely poem. Hope this helps. Best, RFL
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Hi Al, I haven't read your work in a while and am happy to see this piece, which I call, "Ode to Women". Just a thought. I really love this work; a man giving praise to women, especially those parts of her that nourish the next generation. Kudos to you.
Can I make a couple of suggestions? In the first paragraph you include "feminine gender". That is so scientific/academic/cold. Yet, your piece is loving and tender. Might I suggest that you include one of the following phrases instead: ". . . with visible breasts' beauty; the supreme nurturing gift"; or something like that. My point is to take the academic terms out of this lovely poem. Hope this helps. Best, RFL
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Thank you for your wonderful and helpful review I do appreciate.
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Congratulations on achieving ALL TIME BEST. RFL
Comment from apky
I haven't read much from you in the past. But this story is indeed poetic.
I thoroughly enjoyed how you rxulted God's variety of creation. This is something I often marvel about even just by taking a walk in the woods or along the street. You see so many different trees in their magnificence but they are all trees. You see different people in all their continuum of pigmentation and God made them all beautiful. I even walk around my garden to see the flowers and their various colours - all beautiful.
This is superb!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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I haven't read much from you in the past. But this story is indeed poetic.
I thoroughly enjoyed how you rxulted God's variety of creation. This is something I often marvel about even just by taking a walk in the woods or along the street. You see so many different trees in their magnificence but they are all trees. You see different people in all their continuum of pigmentation and God made them all beautiful. I even walk around my garden to see the flowers and their various colours - all beautiful.
This is superb!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Thank you for your wonderful and literary review I do appreciate.
Now the work is ALL TIME BEST
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderfully and very thoughtfully composed piece -- says so very much through both image and imagery that it almost brings a tear to the reader's eye. Well-done and Praise the Lord, for He is good! :) :)
Thanks for sharing that warmth and tenderness with all of us today! :) :)
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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A wonderfully and very thoughtfully composed piece -- says so very much through both image and imagery that it almost brings a tear to the reader's eye. Well-done and Praise the Lord, for He is good! :) :)
Thanks for sharing that warmth and tenderness with all of us today! :) :)
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this nice review I do appreciate.
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Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear, how lovely to see a work of yours and it is a very nice read. I enjoyed your take on nature and how breast serves a wonderful dual purpose. Nature is absolutely wonderful, isn't it? And that's what I felt when I read your prose. NIcely written and very expressive.
Thank you for sharing your writing, which I found a pleasure to read and review, Ana.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear, how lovely to see a work of yours and it is a very nice read. I enjoyed your take on nature and how breast serves a wonderful dual purpose. Nature is absolutely wonderful, isn't it? And that's what I felt when I read your prose. NIcely written and very expressive.
Thank you for sharing your writing, which I found a pleasure to read and review, Ana.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this emotional and wonderful review I do appreciate.
Now the work is recognized ALL TIME BEST
Comment from William Ross
God did a good job on the female breast has captivated man since the beginning. plus they are multiple purpose, lol. thanks for the share and have a wonderful day
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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God did a good job on the female breast has captivated man since the beginning. plus they are multiple purpose, lol. thanks for the share and have a wonderful day
Comment Written 26-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review.
Comment from dovemarie
Dear Alcreator, Breasts are so beautiful, and they are so useful as well. They form loving relationships, in feeding and love ways. I didn't notice the acrostic form until your notes told me. Beautiful picture of mother being close to her babies. Dove P.S. How do you revive a post? I'd like to do that too. I have a lot of poems from 2011 that I'd like people to see.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Dear Alcreator, Breasts are so beautiful, and they are so useful as well. They form loving relationships, in feeding and love ways. I didn't notice the acrostic form until your notes told me. Beautiful picture of mother being close to her babies. Dove P.S. How do you revive a post? I'd like to do that too. I have a lot of poems from 2011 that I'd like people to see.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review.
Comment from royowen
My wife breast fed my two girls till they were two, and they in turn breast fed their offspring till they were ready to be be weaned, they are all well adjusted children and adults, well done, a beautifully written article on the importance of breastfeeding, well done, blessings, Roy l
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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My wife breast fed my two girls till they were two, and they in turn breast fed their offspring till they were ready to be be weaned, they are all well adjusted children and adults, well done, a beautifully written article on the importance of breastfeeding, well done, blessings, Roy l
Comment Written 25-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this good review.
Comment from diamondbogle
I really liked this! It was very well thought out and put together. I enjoyed the simplicity of it. Also very matter of fact and to the point. As a women it holds extra meaning to me. Overall really well done.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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I really liked this! It was very well thought out and put together. I enjoyed the simplicity of it. Also very matter of fact and to the point. As a women it holds extra meaning to me. Overall really well done.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review.
Comment from judiverse
I did notice the acrostic, but that didn't seem that important to understanding the write. You are using breasts, I think, to illustrate that every one of God's creations has a purpose, and your words of description are well-chosen. Reminds me of the numerous paintings of Madonna and Child. judi
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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I did notice the acrostic, but that didn't seem that important to understanding the write. You are using breasts, I think, to illustrate that every one of God's creations has a purpose, and your words of description are well-chosen. Reminds me of the numerous paintings of Madonna and Child. judi
Comment Written 25-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review I appreciate.
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You're welcome. judi
Comment from kiwijenny
I can relate as I have twins. The charge nurse called me the 'prize mother milker in the hospital....yep I said Moooove along ...lol
Beautiful photo and treatise. God knows .
God bless
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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I can relate as I have twins. The charge nurse called me the 'prize mother milker in the hospital....yep I said Moooove along ...lol
Beautiful photo and treatise. God knows .
God bless
Comment Written 25-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review.
