God Creates Breasts' Beauty!
God Creates beauty of female breasts purposefully154 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ah... What defines art? My friend, yours is a beautifully designed prose poem, in my opinion, with a perspective on beauty that is wonderfully unique - kudos to you for clarifying the reason women have breasts, for removing the (repressive) lust that so often is associated with the glands. And done in acrostic form, of all things!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2018
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Ah... What defines art? My friend, yours is a beautifully designed prose poem, in my opinion, with a perspective on beauty that is wonderfully unique - kudos to you for clarifying the reason women have breasts, for removing the (repressive) lust that so often is associated with the glands. And done in acrostic form, of all things!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review I appreciate.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Friend,
Though I am not totally comfortable seeing a poem like this -- I can't deny your message is a good one. Everything you say is right and that image is quite precious. *smile*
One small note:
1.) mortal man uniquely and (purposefully),
Thanks!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Dear Friend,
Though I am not totally comfortable seeing a poem like this -- I can't deny your message is a good one. Everything you say is right and that image is quite precious. *smile*
One small note:
1.) mortal man uniquely and (purposefully),
Thanks!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this nice review I appreciate.
Comment from Michael Steinert
I like this poem quite a bit or as you say non fiction writing. The difference between the genders is important biologically and spiritually and for the continuation of mankind. Interesting write!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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I like this poem quite a bit or as you say non fiction writing. The difference between the genders is important biologically and spiritually and for the continuation of mankind. Interesting write!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear
I like how you give a bit here and their with your poetic talent telling us the natural and necessary beauty that we see that God intended to be of all those who nurse their young .
Gert
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear
I like how you give a bit here and their with your poetic talent telling us the natural and necessary beauty that we see that God intended to be of all those who nurse their young .
Gert
Comment Written 28-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review.
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You are welcome Alcreator Litt Dear
Gert
Comment from pbomar1115
Certainly, our society has not been raised with the education to be as wholesome minded when it comes to child rearing. We have women who do not see children as an inviolable gift from God.
Phillip
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Certainly, our society has not been raised with the education to be as wholesome minded when it comes to child rearing. We have women who do not see children as an inviolable gift from God.
Phillip
Comment Written 28-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was very well written and, yes, I saw the acrostic, GOD. He made all females able to feed all their young. Animals generally have more young than the human female, so He created accordingly. Excellent! :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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That was very well written and, yes, I saw the acrostic, GOD. He made all females able to feed all their young. Animals generally have more young than the human female, so He created accordingly. Excellent! :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 28-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this nice review.
Comment from Ogden
Dr. Alcreator, commendably, you have taken a most scholarly approach to the topic of mammalian breasts. Very insightful, and a fitting tribute to those essential organs.
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Dr. Alcreator, commendably, you have taken a most scholarly approach to the topic of mammalian breasts. Very insightful, and a fitting tribute to those essential organs.
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 28-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this appreciable review.
The work is now ALL TIME BEST.
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Congratulations!
Comment from Annika Fiercely
Tbh I'm not entirely sure what the intention of this is (the acrostic is fun though and I think there are some interesting thoughts and it's definitely unique)
Here are some grammatical suggestions, in capitals so they stand out):
God (NO COMMA) creates and gives mortal man uniquely and purposefully THE FEMALE SEX* with BREASTS' VISIBLE BEAUTY
*'nouns have gender, people have sex' is the classic rule though that's debatable
Orderly , He gifts two breasts to a woman, four to a cow, six to a lioness and eight to a bitch, under His objective creations (WHY UNDER? I DON'T KNOW WHAT THIS MEANS), naturally programmed with design, shape, STRUCTURAL supremacy in through His absolute masterly creation (OF?) infinity.
Distinctly, He plans, designs and offers beauty, while a mother feeds a baby or two; a mammal mother feeds new-born family members.
So, God beautifies a mother to serve TWO prime purposeS: ecstatic joy infinite, and for feeding new generations WITH breasts' different users.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Tbh I'm not entirely sure what the intention of this is (the acrostic is fun though and I think there are some interesting thoughts and it's definitely unique)
Here are some grammatical suggestions, in capitals so they stand out):
God (NO COMMA) creates and gives mortal man uniquely and purposefully THE FEMALE SEX* with BREASTS' VISIBLE BEAUTY
*'nouns have gender, people have sex' is the classic rule though that's debatable
Orderly , He gifts two breasts to a woman, four to a cow, six to a lioness and eight to a bitch, under His objective creations (WHY UNDER? I DON'T KNOW WHAT THIS MEANS), naturally programmed with design, shape, STRUCTURAL supremacy in through His absolute masterly creation (OF?) infinity.
Distinctly, He plans, designs and offers beauty, while a mother feeds a baby or two; a mammal mother feeds new-born family members.
So, God beautifies a mother to serve TWO prime purposeS: ecstatic joy infinite, and for feeding new generations WITH breasts' different users.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Thank you for a helpful review.
Edited.
Now It's recognized ALL TIME BEST
Please revisit.
Comment from Joan E.
The photograph caught my attention and I was pleased to see the post was from you who so often review. I read mostly poetry on FanStory and was pleased to see the poetic flair in this prose piece and even the use of the acrostic form. I had not thought about different creatures having numerous breasts by design. Thank you for sharing your insights- Joan
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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The photograph caught my attention and I was pleased to see the post was from you who so often review. I read mostly poetry on FanStory and was pleased to see the poetic flair in this prose piece and even the use of the acrostic form. I had not thought about different creatures having numerous breasts by design. Thank you for sharing your insights- Joan
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this wonderful review I appreciate.
Comment from Aussie
I did like your explanations of His perfections of the female body. His plans are perfect, still, women (especially in America) go to plastic surgeons to look better? We are given all we need as women, to feed a child or not. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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I did like your explanations of His perfections of the female body. His plans are perfect, still, women (especially in America) go to plastic surgeons to look better? We are given all we need as women, to feed a child or not. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this appreciable review I do appreciate.
