God Creates Breasts' Beauty!
God Creates beauty of female breasts purposefully154 total reviews
Comment from Earl Corp
I think you are absolutely correct, women's breasts are one of God's greatest gifts to mankind. I liked this mixing of styles. You did a very nice job.
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I think you are absolutely correct, women's breasts are one of God's greatest gifts to mankind. I liked this mixing of styles. You did a very nice job.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
Comment from Poetic Friend
I have never thought about the number of mammary glands that God gives mammals until I read your story.
I think some mammals are given more mammary glands because they have multiple offspring at birth. Just my thought.
Your commentary is quite interesting because the language causes the reader to pause, reflect and think, which is good.
Thank you for sharing this thought-provoking story.
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I have never thought about the number of mammary glands that God gives mammals until I read your story.
I think some mammals are given more mammary glands because they have multiple offspring at birth. Just my thought.
Your commentary is quite interesting because the language causes the reader to pause, reflect and think, which is good.
Thank you for sharing this thought-provoking story.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
Comment from cajunjoe
Very correct, I like this , what you have written and how you write it. The breasts have more reason for being there than just beauty but the beauty is what begets children because of the allure to man. Then the dual purpose comes in when the child is born. Oh what a mighty God we serve
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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Very correct, I like this , what you have written and how you write it. The breasts have more reason for being there than just beauty but the beauty is what begets children because of the allure to man. Then the dual purpose comes in when the child is born. Oh what a mighty God we serve
Comment Written 08-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this nice review I appreciate.
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you're welcome
Comment from tfawcus
A factual account of the various configurations of mammary glands in mammals, which has been related to the design purposes of the Almighty. An interesting poem with embedded acrostic.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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A factual account of the various configurations of mammary glands in mammals, which has been related to the design purposes of the Almighty. An interesting poem with embedded acrostic.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good comment.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
ALCREATOR LITT DEAR:
Thank you for sharing this 100-word non-fiction shared as a poetic essence
with your fellow fanstorians. Adding the acrostic-type style with the beginning of each paragraph only adds to the uniqueness and beauty of your message.
keep up the good work
jan
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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ALCREATOR LITT DEAR:
Thank you for sharing this 100-word non-fiction shared as a poetic essence
with your fellow fanstorians. Adding the acrostic-type style with the beginning of each paragraph only adds to the uniqueness and beauty of your message.
keep up the good work
jan
Comment Written 05-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this nice review I appreciate.
Comment from donette1914
it is such a blessing to be able to nurse and you did an amazing job and i this is truly well penned.
it was a honor to read your work
thank you for sharing
donette1914 Aug 2, 2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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it is such a blessing to be able to nurse and you did an amazing job and i this is truly well penned.
it was a honor to read your work
thank you for sharing
donette1914 Aug 2, 2018
Comment Written 02-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this wishful feedback.
Comment from Van
Very interesting composition indeed. Nice touch to put the acrostic reference in there to GOD's. Breasts' Beauty in the title is fairly self-explanatory. But "feeding new generations to breasts' different users," is an anomaly that is confusing, which in turn, makes the reference to a 'cohesive read' sort of contradictive. Nice payout for the work though. ;)
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Very interesting composition indeed. Nice touch to put the acrostic reference in there to GOD's. Breasts' Beauty in the title is fairly self-explanatory. But "feeding new generations to breasts' different users," is an anomaly that is confusing, which in turn, makes the reference to a 'cohesive read' sort of contradictive. Nice payout for the work though. ;)
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thanks.
Comment from Badger_29
A wonderfully written tribute to the mammary glands of both man and Beast. Very descriptive, I like how you included the numbers which doubled and then quadrupled a wonderful flowing writing that read in a poetic way and I'm glad that you include the included the notes at the end to show the acrostic.
Is also a very clever use of your word play with a multi-level puns and the very end line is pack a punch
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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A wonderfully written tribute to the mammary glands of both man and Beast. Very descriptive, I like how you included the numbers which doubled and then quadrupled a wonderful flowing writing that read in a poetic way and I'm glad that you include the included the notes at the end to show the acrostic.
Is also a very clever use of your word play with a multi-level puns and the very end line is pack a punch
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this awesome, wise review I do appreciate.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Do you mean they can be used for that too? I did not know that. Honey, come here and read this. This is extremely well-written. You will do well in the contest. I know there isn't a contest, but I needed the filler.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Do you mean they can be used for that too? I did not know that. Honey, come here and read this. This is extremely well-written. You will do well in the contest. I know there isn't a contest, but I needed the filler.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this feedback from a world-class writer of your stature.
Anyway, I have created two contests - Make A Better World and Make World Better Everyday,
Comment from JanPerry
In depth analysis of breasts. Why is it God(s)? There is but one God, otherwise it is apostrophe s.
I think the girl in the pic is too young to bear children and offers a bad example to others. Wait until you are of suitable age to have the burden and responsibility of this.
Otherwise it's clear you appreciate their beauty.
Thanks.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2018
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In depth analysis of breasts. Why is it God(s)? There is but one God, otherwise it is apostrophe s.
I think the girl in the pic is too young to bear children and offers a bad example to others. Wait until you are of suitable age to have the burden and responsibility of this.
Otherwise it's clear you appreciate their beauty.
Thanks.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2018
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Thank you.
