God Creates Breasts' Beauty!
God Creates beauty of female breasts purposefully154 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
An intriguing paean to breasts. Tastefully done--it's refreshing to read a poem on this topic that doesn't make reference to "tits" and such crude slang.
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An intriguing paean to breasts. Tastefully done--it's refreshing to read a poem on this topic that doesn't make reference to "tits" and such crude slang.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
Comment from Raul1
This is a beautiful poem. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. I like how you structured it. Beautiful poetry. Excellent work! No mistakes. Thank you for sharing!
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This is a beautiful poem. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. I like how you structured it. Beautiful poetry. Excellent work! No mistakes. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 08-May-2021
Comment from Janet Foor
A beautiful picture and a beautiful message. I breast fed my children and I think it creates a special bond between mother and child from their beginning.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
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A beautiful picture and a beautiful message. I breast fed my children and I think it creates a special bond between mother and child from their beginning.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 08-May-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
I am glad to read the glowing compliments given to the woman. When God created woman he was just showing he had created the most beautiful and holy thing in the world. I enjoyed the one-of-a-kind poetry and the feelings expressed in it. Thanks for sharing!
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I am glad to read the glowing compliments given to the woman. When God created woman he was just showing he had created the most beautiful and holy thing in the world. I enjoyed the one-of-a-kind poetry and the feelings expressed in it. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 08-May-2021
Comment from nomi338
The thing to be noted here for me, God creates the human body in perfection. Satan the Devil, confuses the mind causing humans to reject their body's design and desire to become something different. I get that you were not trying to be religious, but God and creation is religious nevertheless. Good poem, I enjoyed it.
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The thing to be noted here for me, God creates the human body in perfection. Satan the Devil, confuses the mind causing humans to reject their body's design and desire to become something different. I get that you were not trying to be religious, but God and creation is religious nevertheless. Good poem, I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
Comment from Erika Seshadri
This is interesting and creative. I'm sure breast lovers everywhere are rejoicing at your last stanza.
Though, I have a question about your request for reviews free of misinterpretation... Isn't half the beauty of sharing your poetry to allow your readers to interpret the meaning of your words for themselves? Especially in something like this, full of grammatical inconsistencies and run on sentences, it is up to the reader to assume what is meant in some places when it is not obvious.
Also, if God is not prescribed to a particular religion, how do we know He is not a She?
These questions are just me, thinking out loud, inspired by what I read.
You are a very unique and creative writer. Have a lovely weekend.
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This is interesting and creative. I'm sure breast lovers everywhere are rejoicing at your last stanza.
Though, I have a question about your request for reviews free of misinterpretation... Isn't half the beauty of sharing your poetry to allow your readers to interpret the meaning of your words for themselves? Especially in something like this, full of grammatical inconsistencies and run on sentences, it is up to the reader to assume what is meant in some places when it is not obvious.
Also, if God is not prescribed to a particular religion, how do we know He is not a She?
These questions are just me, thinking out loud, inspired by what I read.
You are a very unique and creative writer. Have a lovely weekend.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
Comment from DentedSyke
I appreciate what you are saying here. God really does know what he's doing when He creates. I also like that you used the word "purposively." It's unique but clear. I suppose I feel that the second and third "stanzas" felt like I was reading a science paper. I understand that this isn't your intention, but it reads that way to me. I re-read this piece several times to get more familiar with it.
All in all, this is a good work. You are a good writer. Keep writing!
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I appreciate what you are saying here. God really does know what he's doing when He creates. I also like that you used the word "purposively." It's unique but clear. I suppose I feel that the second and third "stanzas" felt like I was reading a science paper. I understand that this isn't your intention, but it reads that way to me. I re-read this piece several times to get more familiar with it.
All in all, this is a good work. You are a good writer. Keep writing!
Comment Written 08-May-2021
Comment from 20hrockwell
What I find most fascinating about your work is how simple yet complex it can be made. I enjoy that the theme is broad enough that it may be applied to anything that by God's hands exists and that it is easily comprehensible. Thank you for sharing such a thought-provoking poem.
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What I find most fascinating about your work is how simple yet complex it can be made. I enjoy that the theme is broad enough that it may be applied to anything that by God's hands exists and that it is easily comprehensible. Thank you for sharing such a thought-provoking poem.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem they are a perfect match
I love the way your words flow just as it would from a mothers breast with all those awesome words you use in your poem
I was blessed to nurse two out of four children.
I thank God for that wonderful experience.
Thank you for sharing
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem they are a perfect match
I love the way your words flow just as it would from a mothers breast with all those awesome words you use in your poem
I was blessed to nurse two out of four children.
I thank God for that wonderful experience.
Thank you for sharing
cookie
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
Comment from Tpa
It is truly a wonderful piece of art that express God's intentions of the creation of the woman's anatomy and the respect it deserves, unfortunately, not all mortal men take heed to His instruction.
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It is truly a wonderful piece of art that express God's intentions of the creation of the woman's anatomy and the respect it deserves, unfortunately, not all mortal men take heed to His instruction.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
