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God Creates Breasts' Beauty!

God Creates beauty of female breasts purposefully

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Comment from Mteske
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I think you may have been able to put this into the poem category. Your layout and organization makes it easy to follow and not get lost. You have great word choice- ecstatic, distinctly, uniquely etc.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2013


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Comment from dennis0530
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This is an ode to breasts and breastfeeding.

I find both fact and humor in your work. Why indeed are women gifted with only 2 breasts? I have seen women with twins, triplets, quadruplets and other multiple births. Thank goodness for infant formulas. If not for this, one can only imagine how a mother could suckle her newborns. On the other hand, how come a cow has also only one but with four teats? Since a cow usually has only one calf, maybe having four teats is a back-up guarantee for a malfunction?

And in further praise of breasts, breastfeeding is said to be the best way to nourish the baby - supply is ready and fresh... and it comes in handy containers.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2013


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Comment from SteveY
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Now there's an interesting topic to write about! Holy cow, no pun intended! I did not see a picture with this one though, so I don't know if you had one or not.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2013


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Comment from Cookie333
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The beauty of sustenance, nurturing, and growing the seed of future generations within...A unique approach, factual, yet leading the leader's imagination along many individual paths.
thank you
karen

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2013


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Comment from Perp Ihebom
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I like this. I found it informative. I did not know that a cow had four breasts only, a lioness , six and a female dog eight. very well done

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2013


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Comment from NicciFaye
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I was actually pretty taken away but the understanding of this message you convey. God's creative plan is perfect in all his Holy glory. It is man who creates things that are not perfect and in order. I agree with your message.

It is hard to read with spags.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2013


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Comment from Cry the Vile Rebel
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This was almost an ode to that beauty. Solomon certainly waxed poetic on the subject. You use words very sparingly, I think that adds some weight to each one.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2013


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Comment from Spitfire
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Although you have a good idea, the title is awkward, also the category. More of a philosophical essay. I do like the enumeration of the number of breasts accorded each animal. Six words end in -ly. Not the best writing. Perhaps this might work better as a poem?

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2013


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Comment from Dustybones
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You have manage to makke me laugh out loud with this supposition of the harmony and balance of having two breasts and the beauty of this gift. I wonder if a woman is glad we have two balls?

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2013


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Comment from William Walz
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I don't know quite what to say about this. The writing is nearly incomprehensible, and the message is totally unclear. I suppose it is that the number of breasts is a measure of a animal's worth. Fewer the better is what I'm getting. Numerous spag issues abound. Sorry. I wish I could be more positive.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2013


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