God Creates Breasts' Beauty!
God Creates beauty of female breasts purposefully154 total reviews
Comment from brentman99
A very interesting choice of topic. Food for one, fun for another... I would say that a really nice picture would have added wonders to the work, but I'm not sure it would fly very well on the site.
One style comment I have is:
So, God beautifies her to serve prime purposes with her two " ecstatic joy infinite and feeding new generations to breasts' different users. - there is only one quotation, so you appear to be missing one. As well, I was surprised that you name a cow, lion, but use bitch instead of dog. But I know what you mean, so it still works.
Other than that, it seems to work. Thanks for sharing, Brent.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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A very interesting choice of topic. Food for one, fun for another... I would say that a really nice picture would have added wonders to the work, but I'm not sure it would fly very well on the site.
One style comment I have is:
So, God beautifies her to serve prime purposes with her two " ecstatic joy infinite and feeding new generations to breasts' different users. - there is only one quotation, so you appear to be missing one. As well, I was surprised that you name a cow, lion, but use bitch instead of dog. But I know what you mean, so it still works.
Other than that, it seems to work. Thanks for sharing, Brent.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Sorry for being late.
Thank you for this good review.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Alcreator Litt Dear
An interesting form in which to express your thoughts on the beauty of creation. Beauty and function in the means for succouring the offspring.
Patrick
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Hi Alcreator Litt Dear
An interesting form in which to express your thoughts on the beauty of creation. Beauty and function in the means for succouring the offspring.
Patrick
Comment Written 25-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Sorry for being late.
Thank you for this good review.
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
LOVE THESE BITS:
"He gifts two breasts and not one to a woman, four to a cow, six to a lioness and eight to a bitch...
"So, God beautifies her to serve prime purposes with her two..
Never thought of breasts that way.
Regards:
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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LOVE THESE BITS:
"He gifts two breasts and not one to a woman, four to a cow, six to a lioness and eight to a bitch...
"So, God beautifies her to serve prime purposes with her two..
Never thought of breasts that way.
Regards:
Comment Written 25-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Sorry for being late.
Thank you for this good review.
Comment from DictionaryGirl
I really liked this, and it is perfect for this time of year. I can't find anything that needs to be corrected or changed. Thank you for writing it.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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I really liked this, and it is perfect for this time of year. I can't find anything that needs to be corrected or changed. Thank you for writing it.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Sorry for being late.
Thank you for this good review.
Comment from Mastery
Well said, Alcreator. I remember you from way back when I joined in 2004. Where have you been? I am trying to understand the exact meaning of this piece, but am I admit a bit lost. Bob (Mastery)
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Well said, Alcreator. I remember you from way back when I joined in 2004. Where have you been? I am trying to understand the exact meaning of this piece, but am I admit a bit lost. Bob (Mastery)
Comment Written 25-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Sorry for being late.
Thanks.
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I have a new chapter called "The Date" if you have time. :) Bob
Comment from Gloria ....
Good evening Dear. I'm at a little bit of a loss here in understanding what it is you want to communicate. It sounds like a poem celebrating female mammary glands. So pardon me for not really understanding, I enjoyed reading it nonetheless.
Gloria
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Good evening Dear. I'm at a little bit of a loss here in understanding what it is you want to communicate. It sounds like a poem celebrating female mammary glands. So pardon me for not really understanding, I enjoyed reading it nonetheless.
Gloria
Comment Written 25-Oct-2013
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Sorry for being late.
Thanks.
Comment from lancellot
Okay, I read this several times in an antempt to understand what you were trying convey. Aside from thw word God there doesn't appear tobe much spirituality in this. That god makes breasts in pairs isn't a story. I would change this the poetry category, it is not prose.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Okay, I read this several times in an antempt to understand what you were trying convey. Aside from thw word God there doesn't appear tobe much spirituality in this. That god makes breasts in pairs isn't a story. I would change this the poetry category, it is not prose.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
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Sorry for being late.
Thanks.
Comment from Bobby Jo
As a mother who has nursed her children, I can agree with what you wrote. You might want to read the story I wrote: "The Miracle of Life" Thanks.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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As a mother who has nursed her children, I can agree with what you wrote. You might want to read the story I wrote: "The Miracle of Life" Thanks.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Sorry for being late.
Thank you for this good comment.
Comment from Sagnik Das
Consequential, & to a degree -- aphoristic. I like the premise of this piece in that it assumes a didactic undertone to emphasize on an elementary aspect of feminine physiology.
Though the sentence-structure did elude me at places, I would yet keep no reserve to appreciate the ardor of your thought & insight. Overall, a good work (fraught in contemplation & substance).
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Consequential, & to a degree -- aphoristic. I like the premise of this piece in that it assumes a didactic undertone to emphasize on an elementary aspect of feminine physiology.
Though the sentence-structure did elude me at places, I would yet keep no reserve to appreciate the ardor of your thought & insight. Overall, a good work (fraught in contemplation & substance).
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Sorry for being late.
Thank you for this good comment.
Comment from Supe
However did you come up with this topic? Hadn't thought about it much before but after a couple of reads I believe all your facts are correct, as far as teats go....and how many, of course. I don't know the spiritual connection but I thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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However did you come up with this topic? Hadn't thought about it much before but after a couple of reads I believe all your facts are correct, as far as teats go....and how many, of course. I don't know the spiritual connection but I thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Sorry for being late.
Thank you for this good review.
