Comment from ragamuffin

Excellent

I found this interesting to read. It shows there was certainly much thought and enthusiasm put into it before the words were printed on paper.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2013

Thank you, I appreciate your thoughts.

Comment from G.B. Smith

Needs Improvement

indeed breasts are wonderful and so important to our humankind. You made this feel like half written sentences and there are many grammatical errors. Not quite sure what you intended, but this missed the mark on all counts
Bear

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018

Thanks.

Comment from MidnightWriter4U

Good

God creates function and beauty seems to be what you are trying to express in this work. There are a lot of "ly" adverbs. I found the breasts an interesting topic for this type of expression. Enjoyed your thoughts.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018

Thanks.

Comment from TOMORAL

Excellent

Very interesting take of the topic of breasts. God gives the number of breasts it takes to feed, just in case a woman has twins. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018

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Comment from Thatguypk

Excellent

Well this is certainly an interesting poem, and an enjoyable read. I'm not sure that I'm with you on the influence of God, but if you're a believer, then you're entitled to see Gods creation of the human form as beautiful as well as functional.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2013

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Comment from allborn66

Excellent

This is a very interesting piece. It could create a strong reaction from some readers. The word choice is wonderful. I was thinking about this subject the other day. I concluded, while the milk produced by the breasts is clearly for the baby, the breast themselves were designed to attract men. The size has nothing to do with milk production, and which other mammal has pronounced mammary glands when not nursing? My bit of controversy, which I'm saving for later. :)
Barbara

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2013

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Comment from Jade Lawson

Excellent

Hi. I understand that you explore the meaning of having of creatures having breasts overall, and then you emphasised the beauty of the human being, the purpose of woman having breasts.
Intriguing to read and explore.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018

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Comment from EMB

Excellent

Hmm. It seems as though you've managed to combine religion with eroticism. So, for that alone, I say "Wow." Of course, that's probably due to where my mind went with this. :)

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2013

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Comment from crowdog110

Good

Nice work. In the second sentance did you mean to say "Gifts" or Gives"? I see where either would work for this piece. I see how you are attempting to combine Gods gifts with beauty and purpose. Thanks for posting

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018

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Comment from Sloegin

Excellent

Although I have been partial to women's breasts, I never thought of things this way. I guess there's always something new under the sun.

1st paragraph; verified in Gemini
2nd paragraph: the wisdom of God
3rd paragraph: the wisdom of God
4th paragraph: God supplies beauty

Good presentation.
Keep writing.
sloegin

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018

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