To Cherish Thorns
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Comment from Journey woman
The construction of the poem in story like fashion flows easily and the breaks with questions fit.
The subject matter relates to anyone having loved and lost no matter the reason. And yes the well intentioned friends who offer the obvious reason ... to move on and let go but it never works that way...
Well done!
Journey Woman
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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The construction of the poem in story like fashion flows easily and the breaks with questions fit.
The subject matter relates to anyone having loved and lost no matter the reason. And yes the well intentioned friends who offer the obvious reason ... to move on and let go but it never works that way...
Well done!
Journey Woman
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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I am pleased you liked this. A very thoughtful review. It is a pretty universal situation. Thank you kindly for the great review and insights. mikey
Comment from Cookie333
Sometimes you just gotta let the pain flood and then ebb. A nice vision of how others try to help with well-meaning words when what we really need to do is let the sadness run its course.
thanks Mike,
karen
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Sometimes you just gotta let the pain flood and then ebb. A nice vision of how others try to help with well-meaning words when what we really need to do is let the sadness run its course.
thanks Mike,
karen
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Yes, exactly and well put. Thank you very much, mikey
Comment from CR Delport
If you grieve, you don't want encouragement. Words seem so hollow and offers no help. Sometimes you just need to be alone. Another great poem.
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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If you grieve, you don't want encouragement. Words seem so hollow and offers no help. Sometimes you just need to be alone. Another great poem.
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Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Yes. That is so true. It is hard to for those that want to help too. Glad you liked this. Thank you, mikey
Comment from tbacha58
You'll love again.
But, not like this,
not like this.
I am so sorry Mike, your so hurt, it shows in this poem more. All I can say, if you are sure its over, do your very best not to waste your time, and allow a closure as soon as possible. Forget the past to be able to live in the Now. I am so sad for you. Hugs Mike , take care. I am here for you anytime. Just write to me. xoxo
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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You'll love again.
But, not like this,
not like this.
I am so sorry Mike, your so hurt, it shows in this poem more. All I can say, if you are sure its over, do your very best not to waste your time, and allow a closure as soon as possible. Forget the past to be able to live in the Now. I am so sad for you. Hugs Mike , take care. I am here for you anytime. Just write to me. xoxo
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Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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This was in the past. I am fine now. You are so sweet to care though. What a lovely person you are. I have so many things I have written over the years. I have things that are forty years old that no one has ever seen. Plus things I write now. A really large pile of stuff that I don't know what to do with. hahaha. A good problem I guess. You are such a dear soul. Thank you for everything, mikey
