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Only God Could Do!

God does so exclusively. A Non-Fiction in 67 words.

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Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, alcreator, you did an excellent job writing this essay about the Creator Who endowed all of His creations with reproductive systems, except for the angels of course

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2013

Comment from CR Delport
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We as humans tend to look at creation only from our tiny little view on earth, but in the context of the universe, we are merely little specks. This is well written, thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2013

Comment from Rondeno
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Your vigorous, dense style reminds me irresistibly of the English Victorian poet, Gerard Manley Hopkins. Refreshingly different.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2013

Comment from The Death
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This is so true. I agree with what you have said here. God is one and we all are equal for him. Thus we should not indulge in discrimination and showing superiority. Purity of heart is the key to be near the creator.Great work

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2013

Comment from Dean Kuch
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The Evolution Theory is wrong. Adam was made of clay and his rib was transformed into Eve because of God's love. The talking snake tempted Eve to eat the Forbidden Fruit. Then, God got angry and condemned them, right?

After that, God hated his creation and murdered them every now and then, like drowning them in a big flood, genocide, etc., if they disobeyed his words. It should be noted God used Noah and Moses to spread his commands instead of Himself for reasons I don't know. People might have obeyed his will if God himself instructed his people instead of making Noah and Moses look like crazy fools to everyone; maybe, people thought they were only joking. I've often wondered why God doesn't show himself to many people as he did in the days of Noah and Moses. Have you asked yourself the reason why? The mass killing could have been prevented.

Allegedly, after a couple of centuries, God changed his mind after years of hating us and now he's now a loving God. Jesus was born magically maybe from the union of Holy Spirit's sperm and ovum of the Virgin Mary. The Son of God redeemed us. People again doubted Jesus, wondered if he was the Messiah, so he was laughed at and insulted by many. Again, if God showed himself instead of delegating his task to someone, people would have believed that Jesus is the real deal, but God didn't. Why do you think God did not show himself? He didn't want to prove his existence?

I always pray and I don't see miracles. Could be my prayers are the wrong sort, and God only chooses random people instead of showing himself to the masses. Is the 'voice' of Abraham, Noah or Moses the real voice of God? Or were they just hallucinating? Could it be the writers of the Bible jumped to the conclusion that what they'd heard was the 'real voice' of God?

That's the truth, whether you like it or not; that's what really happened. You can't ask why God could not show Himself. He's a loving God and he may show himself to you one day. Just believe he's with you, have faith, okay?

Almost every Christian sect claim they are the only "true Christians" on earth because their spirits were tested and they can't be defeated in any debate. That this proves that they really are 'true Christians'. Obviously, false Christians can't enter the kingdom of heaven because their deeds denies their claims as true Christians.

The Evolution Theory is false. The theory is not very sound and it purports that thinking humans somehow will doubt God's existence. Believers of science don't have faith, not as a rule.

This sounds logical, therefore I conclude that creationalism is authentic. It has no contradictions whatsoever. No explanation needed because it's magical and rational in every sense.

Case closed.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2013

Comment from Titanx9
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This is an interesting poem. You talk about how G-d created all of humanity and reproducing life forms with a sense of time and purpose, though each is distinctively different except in one respect: all have male and female reproductive parts that are basically the same. These one's thought-provoking, indeed.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2013

Comment from lindalcreel
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While you have expressed that we are all very different, depending on culture, color, and climate, we still share some of the basic anatomy that is necessary for our people to continue to live. This was a very deep, and spiritual message; at least that's how I interpreted it. doesn't matter that I might be completely wrong, if it's what I think, then it must be right or is that write? Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2013

Comment from emjaihammond
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It's good to see your work again. As it usually does, it concerns things to consider carefully. I enjoy the challenge of taking a look at things we usually don't think too much about. In this case I think it would be wise for people to make this part of their habit. Knowing when to talk and when not to, can be a very important skill.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2013

Comment from Dustybones
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Yep all of that makes life very improbable without God. I can't imagine all of this without God. Then if you consider time and space the chance of everything being right now for us here : WOW

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2013

Comment from michaelcahill
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Only sixty words and you use every one of them. A fine piece and a convincing argument. What you are saying is true and shows the incredible amount of order in the life forms of the world. That order continues in all things. Yes, as one that deals quite a bit with the animal kingdom you are correct even the basic reproductive process is strikingly similar in all, even the smallest, species. Well done, and excellent piece. mike

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2013