Only God Could Do!
God does so exclusively. A Non-Fiction in 67 words.82 total reviews
Comment from Ekim777
No one can doubt our author's seriousness but he makes the Almighty look like a down to earth zoologist. And where does evolution come into it all. Our author deals with potent issues but reduces them to the physical. After all we are dealing life and its place in the universe. They say, simplicity is the highest wisdom. I think if you cut the abstract words and state your case simply, you might please the reader more. Just a thought. -Ekim777
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No one can doubt our author's seriousness but he makes the Almighty look like a down to earth zoologist. And where does evolution come into it all. Our author deals with potent issues but reduces them to the physical. After all we are dealing life and its place in the universe. They say, simplicity is the highest wisdom. I think if you cut the abstract words and state your case simply, you might please the reader more. Just a thought. -Ekim777
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
Comment from misscookie
I think your poem is awesome.
And your words are simple and real. making it easy for everyone top understand.
Thank you for sharing.
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I think your poem is awesome.
And your words are simple and real. making it easy for everyone top understand.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
Comment from barkingdog
I was following that God created all things, all lives including man and gave us invisible soul and length of life. I don't quite understand how similar genital organs fits in. Is that true? Even an amoeba has a vagina and penis? I didn't think a worm or fish had them either. Oh, well.
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I was following that God created all things, all lives including man and gave us invisible soul and length of life. I don't quite understand how similar genital organs fits in. Is that true? Even an amoeba has a vagina and penis? I didn't think a worm or fish had them either. Oh, well.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
Comment from emrpoems
A story well told in sixty words.
And He gifted life span and cycle, invisible soul and mind, heart, sense, feeling and physique with appropriate organs.He designed everything wonderfully
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A story well told in sixty words.
And He gifted life span and cycle, invisible soul and mind, heart, sense, feeling and physique with appropriate organs.He designed everything wonderfully
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
Comment from dennis0530
In your short piece, you are telling about the many attributes of God.
So the theme and message of your work is Creation. Since God created man in His image, it is just fitting that the creation should be perfect.
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In your short piece, you are telling about the many attributes of God.
So the theme and message of your work is Creation. Since God created man in His image, it is just fitting that the creation should be perfect.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Well, sure can't dispute any of that short piece. God did it all, just to think man is created in His image. Very well-done. God loves you and I do too.
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Well, sure can't dispute any of that short piece. God did it all, just to think man is created in His image. Very well-done. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
Comment from Cajungirl
How incredible! You managed to tell a beautiful spiritual story in so very few words. I found your short story very uplifting. Thank you for sharing.
Excellent Job.
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How incredible! You managed to tell a beautiful spiritual story in so very few words. I found your short story very uplifting. Thank you for sharing.
Excellent Job.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
Comment from Gungalo
Al this is awesome given the fact you only had 60 words to use. Strange it more like it don't you think. Otherwise you are saying without saying it we are all related ... man and beast.
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Al this is awesome given the fact you only had 60 words to use. Strange it more like it don't you think. Otherwise you are saying without saying it we are all related ... man and beast.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
Comment from Adri7enne
LOL! So, for a perfectly creative God, He was somewhat repetitive when it came to reproductive organs. Oh well, if something works, why change the model? Is this the main idea you wanted us to come away with? That's original! LOL!
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LOL! So, for a perfectly creative God, He was somewhat repetitive when it came to reproductive organs. Oh well, if something works, why change the model? Is this the main idea you wanted us to come away with? That's original! LOL!
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
Comment from Dawn Munro
Hi, ALD. Nice to see you posting again - I've been so far behind in my reviewing, too!
As always, you offer such a thoughtful message - philosophy must be a favorite topic of yours. You are obviously a deep thinker. Yet, again I wonder at your choice in combining words - e.g. "He gifted...appropriate organs." That in itself is quite a profound way of saying He made man, but why He gifted? He gave would be grammatically correct, and this is listed under the prose column.
In any event, the message is excellent.
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Hi, ALD. Nice to see you posting again - I've been so far behind in my reviewing, too!
As always, you offer such a thoughtful message - philosophy must be a favorite topic of yours. You are obviously a deep thinker. Yet, again I wonder at your choice in combining words - e.g. "He gifted...appropriate organs." That in itself is quite a profound way of saying He made man, but why He gifted? He gave would be grammatically correct, and this is listed under the prose column.
In any event, the message is excellent.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
