Comment from l.d.lauritzen

Excellent

I wonder if a couple of points can be clarified, like lives in the first stanza could be misunderstood-The creator is one and only one; how perfectly he designed and structured all life and man. Get the idea pretty clearly. Keep writing.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2018

Comment from rspoet

Good

Hello Al,
I afraid your writing is not clear in this essay. The information is not accurate or true.
If writing is unclear then it fails the basic purpose on communication.
The best I can award this piece is a four
RS

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018

Thank you for writing a word about your view on this essay, but what is not clear and why you have not mentioned, rather I think it is derogatory to an author that you cannot do, as earlier I mentioned, you do the same repeatedly, without helping an author, you just insult an author and as a reviewer you cannot do that, I find you have been doing the same repeatedly, I never understand what role as a reviewer you are playing, just doing nothing but insulting an author, next time if you do I shall have no other alternatives but to file a complaint against your wrong practice of reviewing, just read your words and think what is your contribution as a reviewer, just you are writing something to insult an author I repeat, you have written --- I AFRAID YOUR WRITING IS NOT CLEAR IN THIS ESSAY. (THE SENTENCE IS INCORRECT, YOU ARE SO POOR IN ENGLISH, CORRECT IS - I AM AFRAID NOT I AFRAID, ANYWAY, YOU HAVE WRITTEN A SENTENCE THAT IS WRONG) . THE INFORMATION IS NOT ACCURATE OR TRUE. So is it a review? You are not playing the role of a reviewer. Just the first sentence you write is incorrect. AGAIN YOU HAVE WRITTEN ANOTHER SENTENCE THAT IS NOT CLEAR AND INEXPRESSIVE --- If writing is unclear then it fails the basic purpose on communication. (THIS SENTENCE IS INEXPRESSIVE, it should have been 'the basic purpose of communication' and not as wrongly you have written, just I have given you two examples or your poor writing in writing. I give you another example of your poor writing in English. You have written the third sentence -- The best I can award this piece is a four. (THIS IS NOT A GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT SENTENCE AND IT IS INEXPRESSIVE, what you award? what is a four? Just you find, you have written three sentences in your so called review, all the three sentences are wrong and inexpressive, I cannot expect a fair review from you, I have given you examples of your writing, while you have reviewed my essay and without giving explanation to help an author, you just insult an author by writing incorrect, inexpressive and unexplained words and writing poor English. In such a circumstance, what I should write, you think what you have done, and if you think you have eligibility to write a review of my works you will do, but I would wish to suggest you something better, you better stop reviewing my works in the future because, writing poor English creating confusions and writing derogatory and writing something simply to insult an author is not wise and appreciable, you should better stop writing reviews of my works and it would be safe, and I should not advice you that you should learn English, that I cannot do, so it would be wise, if you stop reviewing of my works because by doing the job of reviewing (or writing a review) you are not helping an author but insulting a language (by misusing or wrongly using or writing wrongly) and insulting an author,. Wishing you every success in your chosen goal.

Comment from Winslow

Excellent

Dear Alcreator,

For God created the living species. He breathed live into the world and allowed the species to procreate. As you say we own him eternal gratitude.

Regards,

Winslow

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2018

Comment from Kelly Hanna

Excellent

Well this is an interesting read. It is a clever and creative write about the oneness of us all. About similarity even in differences. We all have a sex organ, and they can be slightly similar, but they serve the same hand purpose; Procreation. Which only through God, can we achieve. A great creative write! I enjoyed the presentation as well!

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

Comment from Rene Ravensdale

Excellent

well if someone had doubts of god existence, they only need to think,
and if they cannot do it alone, then they just have to read this!
nice way of proving a point.
keep on the good writing!

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

Comment from giraffmang

Good

Each of His created infinite species of living beings has similar type genital organs! - well, we know for a fact that this isn't actually true. Some living beings are neither gender, and occasionally both...

Some would also argue, quite strongly about the one creator aspect as well, but you know your own mind where is where I guess our own version of reality lives.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018

Thank you.

Comment from jmshumate

Excellent

This is a good read and truth, I especially liked that you used the God's creativity in his design of the sex organs. This is the key to pro creation. I've always said to people who don't believe, " you mean to tell me that it's just coincidence that I have a body part that fits into a female body part perfectly, and not only that it feels wonderful when they are put together because of all the we've endings and what not, and life comes out of that!" No, that's not coincidence, it's God's handy work! Really enjoyed reading this!

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2018

Comment from Jake P.

Good

Good thought, but hard to read and follow. I am not poetic, so I'm sure my critique is unfair. I don't understand the point of the piece.
Perhaps this could be better written as a poem.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018

Thank you for not writing review. Thank you for confessing your own fault and inability. As a common man, it is good, when you do not understand anything, you better skip, why you let others know how poor you are in English and how poor in literature. For your information, this is not a poem. I shall ever remain grateful if you please stop reviewing my works or posting here and you can save your time and energy. Please do not take it personally and feel hurt. You yourself have written, just I have repeating your words and offered a good suggestion.

Comment from Carolyn Reaves

Good

I think your writing shows deep thought and I cannot decide if I understand it fully, but I encourage you to keep writing. I look forward to reading your next works.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018

Thank you for trying to understand my post and failed to. I cannot write below this standard. You cannot understand my words. It is better if you do not try to read my post and try to offer your words that do not help me anyway, the very purpose of reviewing is not ensured, so it would be wise, if you stop writing review for my post, I shall be happy if you just read and try to understand and enjoy, if you can, but please do not write anything like this, because this sort of writing does not help an author but it is somewhat insulting an author. It is common sense, when you do not understand, you should not try to let the author know writing anything but reviewing.

reply by Carolyn Reaves on 30-Nov-2018

Nothing more to say. Evidently, you may only want praise. You are a writer and I am a writer. I take constructive criticism and use it to my advantage. You should have just explained your writing to me so I could understand it. I am sorry you felt insulted. That was never my intent.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

I love your wholesome view of created life and our great and gracious God who made these things for our good pleasure as well as his. I consider my womb to be the most sacred of places and it saddens me when others do not feel the same and opt for abortion. Thank you for this. I am sorry I do not have a six at this time for you.
All my best to you and yours,
Sally

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2018