5-7-5 (wise chameleon)
Reptile Nature (5/7/5)18 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hah, well, he certainly does look happy, LOL...
I nearly bought a rhino chameleon as a pet recently, but I simply could not justify paying $269.00 dollars for a lizard. That's not including the cage, which was another $69.00+tax. Then, the food, bedding, heat lamp...
Great entry for the contest. Good form, great presentation!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Hah, well, he certainly does look happy, LOL...
I nearly bought a rhino chameleon as a pet recently, but I simply could not justify paying $269.00 dollars for a lizard. That's not including the cage, which was another $69.00+tax. Then, the food, bedding, heat lamp...
Great entry for the contest. Good form, great presentation!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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He did look happy didn't he? I would never pay 269 dollars for any pet let alone a lizard. LOL Thank you for the great review.
Comment from nelliesellie
The chameleon lives by an important rule. Be able to blend into the background. It would be a wise idea for humans to follow sometimes. It is not always be good to be the center of attention.I love watching the little creatures move. They make you pay attention. Good read.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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The chameleon lives by an important rule. Be able to blend into the background. It would be a wise idea for humans to follow sometimes. It is not always be good to be the center of attention.I love watching the little creatures move. They make you pay attention. Good read.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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This is such a great review, thank you
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Sometimes it is the best to 'blend in'. Your 5-7-5 speaks well to the natural instincts of the chameleon to match his surroundings. Good luck, Carolyn
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Sometimes it is the best to 'blend in'. Your 5-7-5 speaks well to the natural instincts of the chameleon to match his surroundings. Good luck, Carolyn
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Spot on - it is sometimes better to "blend in" LOL Thank you for the review.
Comment from Taffspride
A good entry for the contest. Nice alliteration in the last line. 'color conformist'
Like fashionistas the cameleon adapts.
Well written
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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A good entry for the contest. Nice alliteration in the last line. 'color conformist'
Like fashionistas the cameleon adapts.
Well written
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the lovely review, Ann. Yes they are a bit like fashionistas. LOL
Comment from RYME4U
This one is Well written. I like the description and the way you have put the main characteristic (color changing)of a chameleon in your poem then tied it all together, Great job
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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This one is Well written. I like the description and the way you have put the main characteristic (color changing)of a chameleon in your poem then tied it all together, Great job
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from mumsyone
wise chameleon
adapts to nature's whimsy
color conformist
Always in style, the chameleon! A great little 5-7-5 for this contest, and I love the photo. Good job!
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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wise chameleon
adapts to nature's whimsy
color conformist
Always in style, the chameleon! A great little 5-7-5 for this contest, and I love the photo. Good job!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the great review
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You're welcome. You also got my vote!
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YAY! I was dying out there. LOL
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In my opinion, you have a very good chance of winning.
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Thank you.
Comment from mountainwriter49
Good Evening, Val
Your nature haiku is superb! It follows the rules of haiku with the first two lines being grammatically connected and capturing a moment in time. The third line serves as a superb satori.
Well done!
Ray
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Good Evening, Val
Your nature haiku is superb! It follows the rules of haiku with the first two lines being grammatically connected and capturing a moment in time. The third line serves as a superb satori.
Well done!
Ray
Comment Written 14-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thanks Ray. It means a great deal coming from you.
Comment from Cindy Warren
That's cute. The chameleon is such an interesting little reptile. My daughter once had one as a pet. It would shoot out it's sticky tongue and catch insects. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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That's cute. The chameleon is such an interesting little reptile. My daughter once had one as a pet. It would shoot out it's sticky tongue and catch insects. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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They are interesting - aren't they. Thank you so much for the wonderful review.
Comment from Tessa Kay
this is the second chameleon poem within half an hour. What an amazing animal to inspire so many people.
A perfect 5-7-5
All the best in the competition.
:) Tessa
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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this is the second chameleon poem within half an hour. What an amazing animal to inspire so many people.
A perfect 5-7-5
All the best in the competition.
:) Tessa
Comment Written 14-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the "stars"
Comment from Capricorn30
Excellent!
A well-crafted reptilian haiku, incorporating good alliteration;
If humans could adapt in the same manner, it would be a much different world.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Excellent!
A well-crafted reptilian haiku, incorporating good alliteration;
If humans could adapt in the same manner, it would be a much different world.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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LOL! I agree. Thank you for the wonderful review.
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Sure.
You're welcome:)
