The Bounty Hunter
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Comment from Mteske
I am already a fan of your . previous two parts and this certainly did not disappoint. You, again, had great word choice- greet, rang, studding, motivated etc. This is a great story!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2013
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I am already a fan of your . previous two parts and this certainly did not disappoint. You, again, had great word choice- greet, rang, studding, motivated etc. This is a great story!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2013
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Thank you. I am working on the fourth chapter now. I only plan to write six. This will be a short novella. I am trying to transition from strictly a short works writer into the novels side.
Comment from w.j.debi
This character is interesting. I keep wondering what he is and where he is going and, of course the bigger question, why? The young woman you have introduced is also intriguing. More questions than answers at this point. Good descriptions and narrative voice.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2013
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This character is interesting. I keep wondering what he is and where he is going and, of course the bigger question, why? The young woman you have introduced is also intriguing. More questions than answers at this point. Good descriptions and narrative voice.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2013
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Thank you. I glad you are enjoying it. I will answer those question in the next and final three chapters.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, lancellot, you did an excellent job writing this continuing saga of the bounty hunter and the angel who gave him back life for his sacrifice. i enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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this is very well written, lancellot, you did an excellent job writing this continuing saga of the bounty hunter and the angel who gave him back life for his sacrifice. i enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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Thank you.
Comment from lindalcreel
I love the way that you leave these subtle little hints, but don't really answer the questions, forcing the reader to read on. Who was the woman? What did she mean by sacrifice? How did she happen upon the colt? And what happened to the body, the lunchbox and the keys? So many questions. We'll have to wait for the next chapters to get the answers. Thanks so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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I love the way that you leave these subtle little hints, but don't really answer the questions, forcing the reader to read on. Who was the woman? What did she mean by sacrifice? How did she happen upon the colt? And what happened to the body, the lunchbox and the keys? So many questions. We'll have to wait for the next chapters to get the answers. Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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Thank you for reading. Breadcrumbs.
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welcome:)
Comment from Norbanus
I can't begin to review this without seeing the other segments. If the segments were posted as book chapters, it would be easier to follow in order. I'll read the others and try to evaluate.
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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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I can't begin to review this without seeing the other segments. If the segments were posted as book chapters, it would be easier to follow in order. I'll read the others and try to evaluate.
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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Thank you. You are correct. I will fix that.
Comment from Silent1rose
Oh my Lancellot... You got me good. I thought the hunter was the slave then realized he wasn't. Then we find out it was a flashback and yay the hunter walked right out of there! I love this series. Great work again. :) ~ Rose
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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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Oh my Lancellot... You got me good. I thought the hunter was the slave then realized he wasn't. Then we find out it was a flashback and yay the hunter walked right out of there! I love this series. Great work again. :) ~ Rose
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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Thank you, Rose. I am happy you liked it and its been fun writing. I won't get to part 4 for a few days. Got to take the wife to Florida for our anniversary. No writing allowed.
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I understand that. You will be missed. Both of you have loads of fun! ~ Rose
