The Voyager
A poem describing myself143 total reviews
Comment from vapros
I was able to find at least some part of your message here, but parts of it were near invisible, due to the color combination. Before releasing a post, please have a look at it, to be sure it carries the necessary contrast to be legible. This one does not.
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I was able to find at least some part of your message here, but parts of it were near invisible, due to the color combination. Before releasing a post, please have a look at it, to be sure it carries the necessary contrast to be legible. This one does not.
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Comment from Spiritual Echo
You paint a vivid picture of an internal war. I suppose it is much easier to walk through life with blind faith, but it has been my experience that these people have somehow earned a divine gift, without doubts.
Most people suffer to find one path. There seem to be so many forks in the road and distractions.
I feel it was an honest revelation of a personal struggle.
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You paint a vivid picture of an internal war. I suppose it is much easier to walk through life with blind faith, but it has been my experience that these people have somehow earned a divine gift, without doubts.
Most people suffer to find one path. There seem to be so many forks in the road and distractions.
I feel it was an honest revelation of a personal struggle.
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Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is a nice piece of spiritual poetry describing the struggles of trying to live in harmony with the will of God . It flows well. kudos
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This is a nice piece of spiritual poetry describing the struggles of trying to live in harmony with the will of God . It flows well. kudos
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Comment from boxergirl
I didn't read your earlier poem but this one really resonates with your search to find peace with God and to make sense of your life. The ABCB rhyme schem helps it flow smoothly from start to finish. My favorite part is the last two lines where you finally surrender and God's Grace takes over. Well done!
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I didn't read your earlier poem but this one really resonates with your search to find peace with God and to make sense of your life. The ABCB rhyme schem helps it flow smoothly from start to finish. My favorite part is the last two lines where you finally surrender and God's Grace takes over. Well done!
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Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The poem extremely thought provoking.
The author writes a descriptive poem that is creative and deep. The artwork is perfect and compliments the poem.
Thank you, harmony13
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Excellent Poem! The poem extremely thought provoking.
The author writes a descriptive poem that is creative and deep. The artwork is perfect and compliments the poem.
Thank you, harmony13
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Comment from Mteske
Your rhymes fit in perfectly and word choice was great- distinguish, forsake, fragile, cope, forebodings etc. This poem had an outstanding theme. I enjoyed this!
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Your rhymes fit in perfectly and word choice was great- distinguish, forsake, fragile, cope, forebodings etc. This poem had an outstanding theme. I enjoyed this!
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Comment from Darkhorse555
from the title drew out words of our lord such an amazingly beautiful piece of writing a delight and beauty to read so much light in is warmness excellent piece
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from the title drew out words of our lord such an amazingly beautiful piece of writing a delight and beauty to read so much light in is warmness excellent piece
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Comment from Cedar
This is a very well written spiritual poem. It sounds like you have Jesus firmly in your heart and soul or else you wouldn't be able to write a piece like this. All any of us can do is just keep a strong faith in what He has promised us and live our lives accordingly. Take care. Bill
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This is a very well written spiritual poem. It sounds like you have Jesus firmly in your heart and soul or else you wouldn't be able to write a piece like this. All any of us can do is just keep a strong faith in what He has promised us and live our lives accordingly. Take care. Bill
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Comment from JM daSilva
I didn't get the poem exactly. Whether you are happy or not. I just think that happiness and sorrow have a lot to do with your expectations. Sometimes a shift is all a person needs.
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I didn't get the poem exactly. Whether you are happy or not. I just think that happiness and sorrow have a lot to do with your expectations. Sometimes a shift is all a person needs.
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Comment from MissMerri
This strikes me as in intensely honest and straightforward look at your own life and heart, and I so admire the courage it takes to write so openly. You say it was written about three years ago, so I have to wonder if things have changed for you since then. I firmly believe that those who seek God will never be disappointed, that the answers they seek will be provided, so I hope that has been your experience. I really enjoyed reading your poem. It is packed with meaning. Keep writing with integrity and hope. I love it.
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This strikes me as in intensely honest and straightforward look at your own life and heart, and I so admire the courage it takes to write so openly. You say it was written about three years ago, so I have to wonder if things have changed for you since then. I firmly believe that those who seek God will never be disappointed, that the answers they seek will be provided, so I hope that has been your experience. I really enjoyed reading your poem. It is packed with meaning. Keep writing with integrity and hope. I love it.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2013
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Thank you Merri
