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Small and Specialty Poems

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Comment from sunnilicious
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Recuperation is process, even if home is more comfortable. It's not such a bad thing, but doctors orders rule......... I hope you get what you'd like... Good work.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2013
    Thank you sunnilicious. I did.
reply by sunnilicious on 11-Oct-2013
    Great news. Hope you can sneak some NFL time in too. Enjoy the weekend :)
Comment from marycec
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Speaks for itself.Hope the answer was in the affirmative.You have done really well to keep up with your writing during this testing time. Prayers for steady progress.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2013
    Thank you Mary. But really behind in reviewing.
reply by marycec on 11-Oct-2013
    Me too. Catching up a bit today!
Comment from Sueellen11
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Nice write,,, I sure hope your wife is recovered well enough for you to bring her home,,, that will be so great to have her home,,, wishing you both well wishes nod a speedy recovery for your wife,,,blessings,,sueellen

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2013
    Thank you Sueellen, yes she is now home.
reply by Sueellen11 on 11-Oct-2013
    That is great news how is she,,,taking it nice and slow,,, how's her pain,, please give her my best,,blessings to you both,,,sueellen
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
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Wow!
A very important question is posed in a
thoughtful light-hearted format.
The couplet query is a clever format which
you have used well here.
I hope the answer is -yes?

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2013
    Thank you Shirey. The answer is yes!
Comment from Preston McWhorter
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Hi,Treischel,
I know that it is worrisome to have someone in the hospital and you long for them to get well come home. Your poem certainly expresses that feeling. Nice rhyme too. Give her my best wishes for a speedy recovery.
Preston

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
    Thank you Preston. I will..
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
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Wow, if you can bring her home, she must be doing well. I sure hope so. You will be busy for a while caring for her. I hope it goes well and she has little pain. I'll keep praying. rox

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
    Thank you Rox.
Comment from TAB_that's me
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A pondering thought you have written in a poem but It leaves the reader wondering what or whom you will bring home.
~teresa`

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
    Thanks Teresa. My wife was in the hospital with back surgery.
reply by TAB_that's me on 11-Oct-2013
    I hope your wife is doing better now.
Comment from Capricorn30
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A hopeful illustration to complement a serious thought;
As yellow is associated with happiness, may this sad but promising face accompany well wishes as hopes of a loved one return home.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
    Thank you Margaret.