Forever With Mary Lou Foster, pt. 4
The prom night ends...like that.26 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I don't see the picture you mentioned.
I thought there would be more. I loved the story. It would be perfect for a Halloween contest.
Congratulations on completing the book. I look forward to more stories.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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I don't see the picture you mentioned.
I thought there would be more. I loved the story. It would be perfect for a Halloween contest.
Congratulations on completing the book. I look forward to more stories.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Fanart some times takes the artwork back. Don't even remember what it was. Lol. Thanks for this. Gretchen
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I never use fanart. I use pinterest.com or Google. Nobody takes my pictures down. But your story didn't need a picture. :)
Comment from BethShelby
Wow! This truned out to be a real horror story. What way to spend eternity all closed up in a coffin with someone you don't want to be with and knowing where you are but with no way out. Nicely written.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Wow! This truned out to be a real horror story. What way to spend eternity all closed up in a coffin with someone you don't want to be with and knowing where you are but with no way out. Nicely written.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Thanks so much. Eternity did turn into Forever with Mary Lou Foster. Gretchen
Comment from Sanku
Oh! MY ! Even in death he can't escape Mary Lou!.It was fun and I enjoy reading them at a stretch .Your flow was very good and so were your dialogues...
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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Oh! MY ! Even in death he can't escape Mary Lou!.It was fun and I enjoy reading them at a stretch .Your flow was very good and so were your dialogues...
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
Lol. What an ending. So that's what hell is! Your story is very humorous and with so much dark comedy that I really enjoyed it even though I am not into zombies at all. Very well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Lol. What an ending. So that's what hell is! Your story is very humorous and with so much dark comedy that I really enjoyed it even though I am not into zombies at all. Very well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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I hate zombie movies. This was my way of taking the scare out the walking dead. Lol. Glad you enjoyed it. Gretchen
Comment from w.j.debi
Well, that didn't go as well as Mary Lou expected and poor Joey just wanted a bit of peace. Guess it just shows you should be careful who you date in high school in case you get stuck with them. Jordy is now stuck with her forever. I am still laughing. There is no RIP for him.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Well, that didn't go as well as Mary Lou expected and poor Joey just wanted a bit of peace. Guess it just shows you should be careful who you date in high school in case you get stuck with them. Jordy is now stuck with her forever. I am still laughing. There is no RIP for him.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed this. And yes, it really was forever with Mary Lou. Lol. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
Eternity is a long time to be stuck with someone like Mary Lou Foster. What am I talking about, eternity is a long time to spend with anyone. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Eternity is a long time to be stuck with someone like Mary Lou Foster. What am I talking about, eternity is a long time to spend with anyone. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Spoken like a true bachelor. Lol. She would be a bit much. Easy on the eyes terrible on the ego. Thanks for this. Gretchen
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
That is a good ending. He got out of the prom and wakes up where he wants to be. Well, maybe not. This is definitely a winner. This would work well in a magazine for teens.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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That is a good ending. He got out of the prom and wakes up where he wants to be. Well, maybe not. This is definitely a winner. This would work well in a magazine for teens.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thanks so much. It was a fun write. I really appreciate this extra special rating. Gretchen
Comment from jessizero
I absolutely LOVED the line "Things are going from horrible to hell quickly." I think you ended the story perfectly. Thanks for reviving this series so those of us who were not around the first time a chance to check it out. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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I absolutely LOVED the line "Things are going from horrible to hell quickly." I think you ended the story perfectly. Thanks for reviving this series so those of us who were not around the first time a chance to check it out. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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I am unearthing things I forgot I wrote. Lol. Glad you enjoyed this. Thank you for the stars. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
Heh heh, I guess there is some sort of justice, but there are problems these days about killing witches heh heh, but it's open for a sequel now heh heh, beautiful written, the irony is overwhelming, Mary Lou is not that nice a character, obviously a mean girl, well done Dear friend, blessings Roy
Typo : I was (a) witch
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Heh heh, I guess there is some sort of justice, but there are problems these days about killing witches heh heh, but it's open for a sequel now heh heh, beautiful written, the irony is overwhelming, Mary Lou is not that nice a character, obviously a mean girl, well done Dear friend, blessings Roy
Typo : I was (a) witch
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thanks, Roy. I'm so glad you liked this. Gretchen
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Pleasure
Comment from Teri7
This is a really neat ending. I would hate to have a dream like that. You used very good dialogue. I did not see a picture on this. Thank you for sharing~ love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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This is a really neat ending. I would hate to have a dream like that. You used very good dialogue. I did not see a picture on this. Thank you for sharing~ love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thanks so much. I wouldn't want to dream about zombies either. Lol. Gretchen
