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Comment from mystery poet
The Pantoum has elluded me for I haven't
accomplished the skills for it. You, though
have breezed through it with honors. It is
in great form and on a rather difficult theme
as well. I appreciate the notes you gave to
help those of us who dream of writing one
someday. I hope that your wife improves...
Blessings for a restful night!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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The Pantoum has elluded me for I haven't
accomplished the skills for it. You, though
have breezed through it with honors. It is
in great form and on a rather difficult theme
as well. I appreciate the notes you gave to
help those of us who dream of writing one
someday. I hope that your wife improves...
Blessings for a restful night!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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Thank you so very much mystery poet for you wonderful review and all tnose wonderful stars.
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Right! You earned them...
Have a blessed night!
LOL::}}Joyce
Comment from sunnilicious
That is an excellent pantoum poem. You are in good form with rhymes. Nice work. And I read your author notes. It sounds like a bad situation... Just make sure to follow those doctors orders. I hope the best for the wife and you.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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That is an excellent pantoum poem. You are in good form with rhymes. Nice work. And I read your author notes. It sounds like a bad situation... Just make sure to follow those doctors orders. I hope the best for the wife and you.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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Thank you sunnilicious for this wonderful review and good wishes.
Comment from DALLAS01
I had a severe back problem that lasted almost eight months, it resulted in sciatica. I could hardly lay or get in and out of bed. I had to prop my work station up and stand all day at my computer. I rarely got more than one or two hours of uninterrupted sleep.
The worse part was thinking it would never end. Your poem describes the futility and inability to process thoughts when severe pain is present.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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I had a severe back problem that lasted almost eight months, it resulted in sciatica. I could hardly lay or get in and out of bed. I had to prop my work station up and stand all day at my computer. I rarely got more than one or two hours of uninterrupted sleep.
The worse part was thinking it would never end. Your poem describes the futility and inability to process thoughts when severe pain is present.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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Thank you Dallas, for your shared impressions.
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You're welcome.
Comment from emrpoems
This a beautiful Plantoum poem and very well written. You must have the art of repeating the lines in this type of poem and you certainly do. The words flowed naturally and made sense.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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This a beautiful Plantoum poem and very well written. You must have the art of repeating the lines in this type of poem and you certainly do. The words flowed naturally and made sense.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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Thank you emrpoems, I appreciate the comments.
Comment from brentman99
A nice poem with a picture that is quite fitting. I can feel the frustration and sense of helplessness that occurs when the pain takes over.
Thanks for sharing, Brent.
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A nice poem with a picture that is quite fitting. I can feel the frustration and sense of helplessness that occurs when the pain takes over.
Thanks for sharing, Brent.
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Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
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Thank you Brent.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Tom,
I can very much relate to chronic pain, how it can grab you and seem to steal the very breath you need to survive.
This is a powerful posting and one I am sure many can relate too. Excellent rhyming sequence and smooth read.
Well penned my friend.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
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Dear Tom,
I can very much relate to chronic pain, how it can grab you and seem to steal the very breath you need to survive.
This is a powerful posting and one I am sure many can relate too. Excellent rhyming sequence and smooth read.
Well penned my friend.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
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Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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Thank you Maureen. Yes, I know you do. I appreciate your comments.
