Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Very creative! This is an excellent story. I enjoyed reading it and your author note.You use descriptive words that draw in a reader. Your dialogue is interesting and authentic.

Best wishes!

Alexandra

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023

Thank you, Alexandra. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

I thought about a zombie comedy movie of a zombie named Ted. It's really funny, like your story.

Jordy and Mary Lou make a cute couple, even if she is annoying and probably killed him. LoL

I'm loving this story. I wish I had a six left.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023

No six necessary. I love getting feedback. Just tell me what you like and don't like. That's what's important. Thanks for this. Gretchen

Comment from T B Botts

Exceptional

This is great Gretchen. I'm really enjoying reading this. You do have an active imagination, but it blends well with your sense of humor. I like your style gal. Keep up the good work.
Blessings,
Tom

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023

I do have an active imagination. Lol. Glad you enjoyed this. Thank you for the extra star. Gretchen

Comment from BethShelby

Exceptional

I remember reading about someone falling out the window and a safe falling on them but I can't seem to remember why they are able to go to the prom. It is an interesting plot and fun to read. Maybe I'll figure it out later/

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023

Hes a zombie who has to fulfill his promise to Mary Lou. Thanks so much for this extra star. Gretchen

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

The zombie is being unveiled .This is a bit of fun as you rightly said. The deadringer cousin is not actually a cousin but a zombie .I think they will soon shriek and run.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023

It was an overactive imagination. Maybe too much caffeine. Lol. Glad you enjoyed it. Gretchen

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Lol. What a predicament he is in! Now, how to explain that? You obviously have a brilliant imagination an excellent story telling. So I am looking forward to more.
Wendy

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023

Thanks, Wendy. So glad you got a laugh. Gretchen

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

How sad that Joey didn't make the first page of the yearbook. It was still a tragic death even though it appeared a bit slapstick. At the prom, he is a bit of a curiosity as people wonder about him. Mary Lou maybe should not have left Joey alone. Heading over to read the ending.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023

Thank you so much. I'm glad you are enjoying this. Gretchen

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

It looks like that something big I was talking about is happening. And it's going to be hard to impossible to explain this as the wax keeps falling off. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023

Would make for an awkward evening. Thanks, Ric. Gretchen

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

Oh no! The wax is coming off! I can understand his being upset that Mary Lou had "moved on" so quickly. I will definitely read the next installment. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023

Thanks so much. So glad you are enjoying this. Gretchen

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is getting very interesting. That would be a really awkward and bad situation to be in. You used great descriptive words and imagery from your words. Can't wait for the next part! love and blessings, teri

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023

Thank you, Teri. I'm so glad you njoyed this. Gretchen