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The dead line

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3 total reviews 
Comment from Adri7enne
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Ah! Leaves me grinning. It's a real 'feel good' story, with a great ending.

I loved the characters - so human, in their unusual circumstances. Very imaginative. One of the many things I love about your work - you're so versatile. I'm always wondering where you're going with this. Good luck in the contest!!!

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
    Thank you. I have no idea what sort of creature the narrator is, but I figure workers have the same gripe whatever the species. Thanks for the review and generous score. You are allowed to spend 6's on other writers, you know
reply by Adri7enne on 01-Oct-2013
    Oh, you don't get them all! But you likely get more than your share. What can I say? LOL!
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
    What? I don't get them all? But I was only being polite, I want them all!
reply by Adri7enne on 01-Oct-2013
    LOL! You're a riot when you have a tantrum. Down, boy!
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Very unusual, entertaining, and very Snodlander. I enjoyed reading about the afterlife with a bureaucratic twist. I hope you do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
    Thank you. Not the first time I've been called twisted. Glad you were entertained
Comment from Rondeno
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

It's unusual (but very agreeable) to find you in Competitionland. This tale of the shooers-in of departed souls has your trademark humor and faultless prose - and is strangely moving! Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2013
    Moving? I do apologise, that was never my attention. I'm competing because I'm between novels, and need some incentive. Thanks for the review.