Grandparenthood
Becoming a grandparent2 total reviews
Comment from Thatguypk
I completely love and enjoy the beautiful sentiment of this piece, and it is very well written, but as a contest entry, I have to point out that it does not meet the 5-7-5 syllable count.
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I completely love and enjoy the beautiful sentiment of this piece, and it is very well written, but as a contest entry, I have to point out that it does not meet the 5-7-5 syllable count.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2013
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was a beautiful for your granddaughter. But this is for 5-7-5 syllable count contest. Your syllable count here is 9/11/10. You may have a problem with the contest organizer, because beautiful as it is, right now it doesn't qualify for the contest.
A beautiful color chosen, and congrats on your new angel.
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This was a beautiful for your granddaughter. But this is for 5-7-5 syllable count contest. Your syllable count here is 9/11/10. You may have a problem with the contest organizer, because beautiful as it is, right now it doesn't qualify for the contest.
A beautiful color chosen, and congrats on your new angel.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2013
