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Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Very nicely written.
The compassion and emotion you feel is well represented in your words.
A presentation and picture choice.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2013
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Very nicely written.
The compassion and emotion you feel is well represented in your words.
A presentation and picture choice.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2013
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Thank you again Shirley.
Comment from Sueellen11
Wow is that what my back pain looks like,,,,,oh I know what your wife goes through,, being a chronic suffering since 2000. When I received compound wedge fractures to T10 T11 T12,,, plus disc damage to c3/4/5,,, and L5 2/3' after being throw down 3 flight of stairs,,,, so I can relate to your wife's suffering,,,blessings to you and your wife,,sueellen
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2013
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Wow is that what my back pain looks like,,,,,oh I know what your wife goes through,, being a chronic suffering since 2000. When I received compound wedge fractures to T10 T11 T12,,, plus disc damage to c3/4/5,,, and L5 2/3' after being throw down 3 flight of stairs,,,, so I can relate to your wife's suffering,,,blessings to you and your wife,,sueellen
Comment Written 29-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2013
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Thank you Sueellen. That sounds horrific, what you went through and still are. Blessings to you also.
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I feel for your wife because every day she lives with pain,, some days worse then others but pain all the time,, and it can be so debilitating and it can make one vert short tempered,,, and moody,,, so please give her support and be there for her in times of insufferable pain,,, you can't ease her pain,, and I know you must feel helpless at times,,, as my hubby does too, but his comfort and his caring with his love and understanding,,, helps me when I really need it,,, but I am sure you are all these things too ,,,blessings to you both,,,sue
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
This excellent senryu painting a picture of almost unbearable pain, the misery it causes, and the lover who would do almost any thing to save his love that pain.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2013
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Hi, Treischel,
This excellent senryu painting a picture of almost unbearable pain, the misery it causes, and the lover who would do almost any thing to save his love that pain.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2013
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Thank you Preston. Yes, you captured it.
Comment from GregoryCody
My heart goes out to you and your wife. I'm a chronic pain sufferer (my arm) but this year I hurt my back. Spasms. Minor compared to hers I'm sure but I can on,y imagine severe back pain. So excruciating. I also know about the pharma side of chronic pain too that can come alone to some, which can be challenging.
Anyway, to your senryu. Perfect form my man. Very clever wrap up. And very sincere deep down. I'm not sure if there was a double meaning or not. Great work. I love it and I personally feel for you and you both are in my prayers.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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My heart goes out to you and your wife. I'm a chronic pain sufferer (my arm) but this year I hurt my back. Spasms. Minor compared to hers I'm sure but I can on,y imagine severe back pain. So excruciating. I also know about the pharma side of chronic pain too that can come alone to some, which can be challenging.
Anyway, to your senryu. Perfect form my man. Very clever wrap up. And very sincere deep down. I'm not sure if there was a double meaning or not. Great work. I love it and I personally feel for you and you both are in my prayers.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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Thank you very much Gregory for this wonderful review and you comforting words, yes, I did intend double meaning. I appreciate your thoughts and prayers.
Comment from Capricorn30
A finely crafted biography which also parallels a romantic expression;
Pain of various kinds greatly improve with the affections from a loved one;
A caring senryu as we all benefit from a loved one's hands.
I hope your wife feels better soon, Tom.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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A finely crafted biography which also parallels a romantic expression;
Pain of various kinds greatly improve with the affections from a loved one;
A caring senryu as we all benefit from a loved one's hands.
I hope your wife feels better soon, Tom.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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Thank you Margaret. She is scheduled for back surgery in two weeks. I hope this one really works. I appreciate your kind comments.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
The timing on this was perfect. Been having those back pains myself for the last few weeks and even more.. Getting better thanks to some goof meds and Mermaids Soft yet strong flippers helping to ease the pain... Lot said in few words my friend
TK
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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The timing on this was perfect. Been having those back pains myself for the last few weeks and even more.. Getting better thanks to some goof meds and Mermaids Soft yet strong flippers helping to ease the pain... Lot said in few words my friend
TK
Comment Written 27-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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Thank you Sir T. She about to have another round of back surgery in two weeks. I hope it works.
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My thoughts are wife her Mr T i HAVE THEY SAY ANYWAY A CASE OF BURSITIS IN MY UPPER LEFT SHOULDER GRR SAID I HAVE TO CUT DOWN ON MY GYM TIME USING WEIGHTS NOW I'LL HAVE TO START RUNNING AND I HATE RUNNING GRR AGAIN LOL WISHING YOUR WIFE BEST OF LUCK OK MR T
TK
Comment from Dean Kuch
I can't tell you how many times I've asked my beautiful wife the exact same question, Tom. She, too, suffers from chronic back pain. While I do my utmost to massage her neck, back and shoulders on a daily basis to help ease her suffering, it only helps temporarily. Even chiropractors can relieve her pain for only brief durations.
I feel for you, my friend, and your lovely wife...
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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I can't tell you how many times I've asked my beautiful wife the exact same question, Tom. She, too, suffers from chronic back pain. While I do my utmost to massage her neck, back and shoulders on a daily basis to help ease her suffering, it only helps temporarily. Even chiropractors can relieve her pain for only brief durations.
I feel for you, my friend, and your lovely wife...
Comment Written 27-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much Dean. You certainly do know. I appreciate your concern.
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
when your back hurts bad 'b' alliteration
and the pain becomes too much good 'middle' line
can I kiss you well LOVE this line for its implied
sexuality AND OR empathy.
Well done...humorous too.
Regards:
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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when your back hurts bad 'b' alliteration
and the pain becomes too much good 'middle' line
can I kiss you well LOVE this line for its implied
sexuality AND OR empathy.
Well done...humorous too.
Regards:
Comment Written 27-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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Thank you Stephen, you surely know what I mean then. I appreciate you concern.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Tom,
I liked this one - your compassions shows through your love - living with chronic pain is a challenge.
Your description above your title I think you mean "If" not 'it'.
Nicely penned senryu.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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Dear Tom,
I liked this one - your compassions shows through your love - living with chronic pain is a challenge.
Your description above your title I think you mean "If" not 'it'.
Nicely penned senryu.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 27-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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You're right. Thank you Maureen, I changed it.
