Jerry Jing-Jang's Halloween
JJJ ain't afraid of no ghost64 total reviews
Comment from kiwijenny
It's that time of year again ...you know the time to scare each other....well done especially with the names...Round up the dog....Jerry Jing Jang.....
Well done
God bless
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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It's that time of year again ...you know the time to scare each other....well done especially with the names...Round up the dog....Jerry Jing Jang.....
Well done
God bless
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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I'm so glad you liked Jerry Jing-Jang and Roundup. Thanks for the stars.
Comment from tfawcus
Great fun! Loved the lines,
"I ain't afear'd of no bump or rattle
Ain't hear'd of no ghost what could rustle cattle.
Good old JJJ!
Nice image of the ghosts of old rustlers 'hanging' on the wall!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Great fun! Loved the lines,
"I ain't afear'd of no bump or rattle
Ain't hear'd of no ghost what could rustle cattle.
Good old JJJ!
Nice image of the ghosts of old rustlers 'hanging' on the wall!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Thanks. He's such a fun character to write. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks again for the stars and the great review.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Very clever and fun. I like your Jerry Jing Jang pieces. This site needs more lighthearted humor on it, and you provide relief from the morbidity and woe-is-me stuff. :)
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Very clever and fun. I like your Jerry Jing Jang pieces. This site needs more lighthearted humor on it, and you provide relief from the morbidity and woe-is-me stuff. :)
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Thanks. I know what you mean about the depressing stuff. Funny thing is, the last one I wrote for the love gone wrong contest is the most depressing thing I've ever written, and it got great reviews. I do appreciate them, but I was surprised. Glad you like JJJ.
Comment from Cookie333
Rusty manages to get away...again? Those ghosts...Well I clearly see through them (heeheee) I do love these pieces my friend,
thank you and best of luck in the contest,
karen
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Rusty manages to get away...again? Those ghosts...Well I clearly see through them (heeheee) I do love these pieces my friend,
thank you and best of luck in the contest,
karen
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Rusty has to get away, or what would JJJ do? He needs the outlaw to chase. Thanks for the stars and the good wishes for the contest.
Comment from Sam Mendonca
A very enjoyable read with a lot of very descriptive wording to bring the story line along.
I enjoyed reading it very much.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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A very enjoyable read with a lot of very descriptive wording to bring the story line along.
I enjoyed reading it very much.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the wonderful review and the good wishes for the contest.
Comment from Starlit Ink
Nice use of monorhyme, which added to the appeal of this tory poem. It has the ambiance of the season, with the ghosts and blustery night. Jerry saved the day, and the ghosts let Rusty go anyway. Oh, those Halloween spooks! Good luck with such a fun entry.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Nice use of monorhyme, which added to the appeal of this tory poem. It has the ambiance of the season, with the ghosts and blustery night. Jerry saved the day, and the ghosts let Rusty go anyway. Oh, those Halloween spooks! Good luck with such a fun entry.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Glad you enjoyed it. Rusty has to get away, or what would JJJ do? He'd be bored if the law hanged Rusty. Thanks for the wonderful review.
Comment from krys123
Thank you Cindy for sharing this poem with myself, bands and other readers/writers. This was an interesting tale about a cattle rustler and the fact that he was met by ghosts. Unless I must say that the constant rhyming after each line was particularly fantastic and done so correctly that it was neither strained, labored or forced. The rhythm was done very well so well that made it very easy for me to understand the poem. You have a good one in God bless.
AK
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Thank you Cindy for sharing this poem with myself, bands and other readers/writers. This was an interesting tale about a cattle rustler and the fact that he was met by ghosts. Unless I must say that the constant rhyming after each line was particularly fantastic and done so correctly that it was neither strained, labored or forced. The rhythm was done very well so well that made it very easy for me to understand the poem. You have a good one in God bless.
AK
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Thanks. I was a little worried about that last stanza. It's good to know you thought it worked. Thanks again for the wonderful review.
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You are so welcome Cindy. I thought it just works fine. And I thought it was very impressive.
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You are so welcome Cindy. I thought it just works fine. And I thought it was very impressive.
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You are so welcome Cindy. I thought it just works fine. And I thought it was very impressive.
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You are so welcome Cindy. I thought it just works fine. And I thought it was very impressive.
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You are so welcome Cindy. I thought it just works fine. And I thought it was very impressive.
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You are so welcome Cindy. I thought it just works fine. And I thought it was very impressive.
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You are so welcome Cindy. I thought it just works fine. And I thought it was very impressive.
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You are so welcome Cindy. I thought it just works fine. And I thought it was very impressive.
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You are so welcome Cindy. I thought it just works fine. And I thought it was very impressive.
Comment from Luvs2rite4u
I absolutely loved your very original poem. Each stanza brought more excitement into the readers' mind. This told a tale of ole and even more presented itself as a poem never to forget. I applaud your work. The word usage played an important part to the reader. Again, awesome job! I know I will never forget this poem. Luvs...
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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I absolutely loved your very original poem. Each stanza brought more excitement into the readers' mind. This told a tale of ole and even more presented itself as a poem never to forget. I applaud your work. The word usage played an important part to the reader. Again, awesome job! I know I will never forget this poem. Luvs...
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Thanks! It means a lot to know it was so memorable. Thanks again for such a wonderful review.
Comment from Charlene0513
This is a very well constructed poem with all the bits and pieces of a western plot.
You have captured the apparition well and your quatrains read smoothly and were consist with poem.
Charlene
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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This is a very well constructed poem with all the bits and pieces of a western plot.
You have captured the apparition well and your quatrains read smoothly and were consist with poem.
Charlene
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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I;m so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the kind words and the wonderful review.
Comment from JennaG
What a fun poem! I like that you made it a cowboy story. I thought that was really original and creative for Halloween poetry. I especially liked when Roundup's teeth found Rusty's hind end. It gave me a good chuckle. :) This is very well written. Best of luck to you in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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What a fun poem! I like that you made it a cowboy story. I thought that was really original and creative for Halloween poetry. I especially liked when Roundup's teeth found Rusty's hind end. It gave me a good chuckle. :) This is very well written. Best of luck to you in the contest. :)
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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I'm so glad you had fun with Jerry Jing-Jang. Thanks for the kind words and good wishes for the contest.
