Jerry Jing-Jang's Halloween
JJJ ain't afraid of no ghost64 total reviews
Comment from boxergirl
I like your Halloween poem. It is cleverly written
with a cute story about Jerry Jing-Jang and his encounter with the Rusty and the ghosts. Nice rhyming which made it flow smoothly. I enjoyed the story. BG 8-)
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2013
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I like your Halloween poem. It is cleverly written
with a cute story about Jerry Jing-Jang and his encounter with the Rusty and the ghosts. Nice rhyming which made it flow smoothly. I enjoyed the story. BG 8-)
Comment Written 21-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2013
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I'm glad you liked Jerry Jing-Jang. There are more of his adventures in my portfolio, if you're interested. Thanks for the wonderful review.
Comment from lakeport
Jerry jing-jangs Halloween, indeed the ghost are on the prowl. that's ghostly story, nice rhyming, I enjoyed reading it;God bless you.Hugs!Lakeport.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
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Jerry jing-jangs Halloween, indeed the ghost are on the prowl. that's ghostly story, nice rhyming, I enjoyed reading it;God bless you.Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the wonderful review.
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your welcome,Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment from SteveY
A nicely written little poem of the old west and ghost and cowboys. It's a great story for the kinds to listen too around a campfire I think!
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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A nicely written little poem of the old west and ghost and cowboys. It's a great story for the kinds to listen too around a campfire I think!
Comment Written 27-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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Glad you enjoyed it. Yes, I can imagine it as a campfire story. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Eternal Muse
An excellent Halloween write, some great rhymes and flow; a killer picture - what a delight to read!
You set the mood with those:
The ghosts, all rustlers hanged on the hill
Were happy to have Rusty stay at his will
Danced at the thought of a most wonderous thrill
There were cattle to rustle and a cowboy to kill.
An excellent contest entry, I wish you lots of luck.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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An excellent Halloween write, some great rhymes and flow; a killer picture - what a delight to read!
You set the mood with those:
The ghosts, all rustlers hanged on the hill
Were happy to have Rusty stay at his will
Danced at the thought of a most wonderous thrill
There were cattle to rustle and a cowboy to kill.
An excellent contest entry, I wish you lots of luck.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the wonderful review and the good wishes for the contest.
Comment from misscookie
I thought this was a delightful poem for Halloween
even though it made ne smile. thinking how someone trespassed on my home and Tip-toe bit them on their butt as they tried to jump the fence..
Tip Toe was the family dog. LOL.
thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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I thought this was a delightful poem for Halloween
even though it made ne smile. thinking how someone trespassed on my home and Tip-toe bit them on their butt as they tried to jump the fence..
Tip Toe was the family dog. LOL.
thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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Sounds like Tip-Toe did a good job. LOL Glad you liked Jerry Jing-Jang and Roundup. Thanks for the stars.
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You're very welcome, Yes he did and the family miss him a lot..
until next time.
Comment from ELumpkins
Long and easy to read. I enjoyed this piece. This fellow Jerry jing-jang could mess up a fellow's day. The piece is interesting, I had to read it over about three times to really know what it was saying., it all came out in the end.
Good post
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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Long and easy to read. I enjoyed this piece. This fellow Jerry jing-jang could mess up a fellow's day. The piece is interesting, I had to read it over about three times to really know what it was saying., it all came out in the end.
Good post
Comment Written 27-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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Yep, if you're a cattle rustler, Jerry Jing-Jang could really ruin your day. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from pickthorn
Jerry Jing Jang is a great name for our hero. This is really a delightful, well written Halloween poem. I really enjoed this one. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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Jerry Jing Jang is a great name for our hero. This is really a delightful, well written Halloween poem. I really enjoed this one. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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I'm so glad you liked Jerry Jing-Jang. Thanks for the wonderful review.
Comment from Irish Rain
ha ha...i just love that name...Jerry-Jing-Jang...loved this entire halloween poem, best of luck to you in this contest, and blessings tonight!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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ha ha...i just love that name...Jerry-Jing-Jang...loved this entire halloween poem, best of luck to you in this contest, and blessings tonight!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from JM daSilva
It's interesting that cowboys always had ghosts as a secondary theme. I wish I could find a ghost, but they hide from me. Maybe one day I'll go to that town. Nice poem. Great job.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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It's interesting that cowboys always had ghosts as a secondary theme. I wish I could find a ghost, but they hide from me. Maybe one day I'll go to that town. Nice poem. Great job.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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JM, there are plenty of ghosts around. I picked up a couple of extra night shifts at the long term care center last week, and several times I went to guide a resident back to their room and suddenly there was nobody there. Glad you liked the poem. Thanks for the review.
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But they don't like me. lol.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a very well-written narrative poem. The plotline has just the right amount of detail, the characters are well-developed, and the theme is effectively implied.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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This is a very well-written narrative poem. The plotline has just the right amount of detail, the characters are well-developed, and the theme is effectively implied.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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I'm glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang. It was a fun poem to write. Thanks for the wonderful review.
