Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Sorry to hear that your team needs to perk up. There is time to pick up those scores. I hope the Dolphins are going good. You voiced heartache well in this poem. Good form. Nice work.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013

Thanks sunnilicious. I'm over it now. 13 more games to go.

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

A very creative way to vocalise disappointment and annoyance.
Your quatrains rhyme well and your emotions are evident.
Iguess sport is like everything else in life theres theups and then the downs.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013

Thank you Shirley. Yes, that's the way it is.

Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

A bad mood creates a well-penned poem;
Fan frustration incorporated into the love a sport, as the promise of a fine season quickly slips away;
Good alliteration you have incorporated: "sad sound";
Perhaps next week they'll pull out a win?

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013

Thank you Margaret. If not, it going to be a long, frustrating season.

reply by Capricorn30 on 23-Sep-2013

Unfortunately, yes.

Comment from Preston McWhorter

Excellent

Hi, my friend,
So the first poem was not enough to sublimate you dreams of football glory. You wrote another. Your poetic gifts serve you well. You may not be able to pick a football winner but you can write a poetic winner.
Preston

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013

Thanks Preston. At least that's encouraging.

Comment from NicciFaye

Excellent

oh....this is funny, but am sorry your in a bad mood. I really enjoyed "the purple are making me blue"....Release the stress and worries in your muse, for your poems are always "winning". (Smile)

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013

Thanks Nicci. I'm over it now. Released.

Comment from Cry the Vile Rebel

Excellent

'Not a sports fan myself, and yet you captured my attention with this "blue" lament. PART of the reason I don't follow football is the roller coaster ride of following your favorite team and getting your hopes up etc... (I live in Seahawks territory, so you can extrapolate the amount of angst and anger going on around me in any given season ; )

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013

Thanks CtVR, I sure can. Although, this season should be a great one for Seattle. They could win it all. Wilson could be an MVP. You've got some great weapons. Even some of our rejected players are flourishing there.

Comment from Sueellen11

Excellent

Sorry for your teams loss it can be so frustrating ,,, I get o put off by the politics of the game,,, the payoffs,,, my team is still in,,, its the final on Friday night,,, we need this win for a playoff in the grand final,,, if we the bunnies win it will be our first gran final win in 45 years,,, but this week we play the cheats and hated team in our league ,,, go the Vikings ,,,, and go the rabbitohs ,, leasing s,,, sueellen

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013

Thank yes Sueelken, yes, go Bunnies!