The end of the line
in a few words how fast death comes and the end2 total reviews
Comment from JonnyRhymes
A simple poem which says a lot in just a few words. Your love for your husband comes across, as does the suddenness of his passing.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
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A simple poem which says a lot in just a few words. Your love for your husband comes across, as does the suddenness of his passing.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
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thank you so much
Comment from rhonny
This is a very well done poem - but not as a 5-7-5 poem as it has way too many syllables in each line. Your words have been sensitively chosen and I really like your work. Just re-enter it as a short free-verse poem. :)
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2016
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This is a very well done poem - but not as a 5-7-5 poem as it has way too many syllables in each line. Your words have been sensitively chosen and I really like your work. Just re-enter it as a short free-verse poem. :)
Comment Written 21-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2016
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thank you
