Leander
poem204 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
it's like pinky and the brain, labrats who want to conquer the world but must first get out the cage, which so often happended to fail them.
anyhoo, thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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it's like pinky and the brain, labrats who want to conquer the world but must first get out the cage, which so often happended to fail them.
anyhoo, thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Pinky and the Brain - my children and I used to LOVE that show! :-) Thanks so much, Rebekka :-) Brooke
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Brooke. LOL.. Cute as cute can be. btw...I like the pix of Sawyer in then blue bunny uniform on the other side of the screen.
"He pilfered spots from butterflies,
their wings now drab and dreary,
and plucked the silver from the stars,
the world now sad and weary."
Good write, Brooke. Bob
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Hi, Brooke. LOL.. Cute as cute can be. btw...I like the pix of Sawyer in then blue bunny uniform on the other side of the screen.
"He pilfered spots from butterflies,
their wings now drab and dreary,
and plucked the silver from the stars,
the world now sad and weary."
Good write, Brooke. Bob
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Thanks so very much, Bob - my daughter takes such great pictures of him. I can't wait for Halloween - so far she has a lion outfit and a bear. I doubt she is finished yet. LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from livelylinda
adewpearl, a great story with wonderful rhythm and rhyme. It made me chuckle throughout the entire read. Good luck with the contest. This poem could certainly be a winner!
livelylinda
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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adewpearl, a great story with wonderful rhythm and rhyme. It made me chuckle throughout the entire read. Good luck with the contest. This poem could certainly be a winner!
livelylinda
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Linda, thank you so very much :-) I so appreciate your encouragement and generosity :-) Brooke
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A nice humorous children's tale about an angry, bad tempered little boy stealing away all the joy. Great ending to have mum tucking him into bed for a sleep and a cute picture to set up this story poem.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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A nice humorous children's tale about an angry, bad tempered little boy stealing away all the joy. Great ending to have mum tucking him into bed for a sleep and a cute picture to set up this story poem.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Pearl, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from barkingdog
Where do you come up with these wonderful lines?
-'He grabbed the hop away from frogs, he swiped the sour from pickles,'
You did one on Leander before, didn't you? I see him sneaking around doing each and every one of these horrible things. You've made him come alive in your evenly-metered, rhyming quatrains.
What a face on Sawyer! LOL Did someone steal his tickle?
:) ellen
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Where do you come up with these wonderful lines?
-'He grabbed the hop away from frogs, he swiped the sour from pickles,'
You did one on Leander before, didn't you? I see him sneaking around doing each and every one of these horrible things. You've made him come alive in your evenly-metered, rhyming quatrains.
What a face on Sawyer! LOL Did someone steal his tickle?
:) ellen
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Yep, the last one on Leander was also when Sawyer was having a slightly naughty moment. LOL He has been fussy at meal times lately, throwing food at Mommy! LOL Thanks so much, Ellen :-) Brooke
Comment from S A Bullen
You're such a wonderful poet! I don't know how you think of all these things: the hop away from frogs, the perfume from the flowers, the spots away from butterflies. So clever! Just beautifully written, Brooke. There used to be one or two leander's at school when my kids were little. Sheryn :-)
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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You're such a wonderful poet! I don't know how you think of all these things: the hop away from frogs, the perfume from the flowers, the spots away from butterflies. So clever! Just beautifully written, Brooke. There used to be one or two leander's at school when my kids were little. Sheryn :-)
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Sheryn, thank you so very much for your great comments and generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from mrsmajor
Brooke,
You continue to pen these wonderful little tales, but I just will not believe any of this was Sawyer's doing, not for a minute...you have a great imagination for these children's poems, I really enjoy them...starlight was just about enough...lol..you have a gift for these well written quatrain verses, and I do hope you intend to put together a book, if only for that little fellow...Thanks so much for sharing this with us it was a fun read...(I know he would never do such things!)....Good luck in the contest!
Big Hugs,
Victoria
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Brooke,
You continue to pen these wonderful little tales, but I just will not believe any of this was Sawyer's doing, not for a minute...you have a great imagination for these children's poems, I really enjoy them...starlight was just about enough...lol..you have a gift for these well written quatrain verses, and I do hope you intend to put together a book, if only for that little fellow...Thanks so much for sharing this with us it was a fun read...(I know he would never do such things!)....Good luck in the contest!
Big Hugs,
Victoria
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Victoria, well, he did nothing on the list, but he did throw food at his Mommy. LOL Thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Now that's more like it...I think they all do that! LOL
Hugs,
Victoria
Comment from Janice Canerdy
That's some expression on Sawyer's face! Little ones convey feelings they don't even realize they have. LOL
This is a great poem, with a superb enumerating of the "evils" of Leander!!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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That's some expression on Sawyer's face! Little ones convey feelings they don't even realize they have. LOL
This is a great poem, with a superb enumerating of the "evils" of Leander!!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Janice, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Brooke, the six is for Cutie Pie....I'm telling you just looking at that picture and his expression had me laughing a very long time. A truly priceless pose for him.
And this poem is so skillfully penned it's an exceptional beauty. I loved it. Perhaps it was the delight held within it, I mean we all have these days....but from a child it is both cute and lighthearted - always the tucking in at night was the greatest moment of love shared. Simple and pure as most kids are when they love.
Do you remember the rhyme Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers....my kids loved to hear that from me just at bedtime, they would say "faster mummy" and I always did...faster and faster till they were laughing their heads off...Your work in this post reminds me of that moment....it felt the same to me somehow.
A simple yet beautiful expression of love. - hope I explained that well. My head is a bit of a mess at the moment.
Thanks so much for sharing this exceptional post. I loved it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Dear Brooke, the six is for Cutie Pie....I'm telling you just looking at that picture and his expression had me laughing a very long time. A truly priceless pose for him.
And this poem is so skillfully penned it's an exceptional beauty. I loved it. Perhaps it was the delight held within it, I mean we all have these days....but from a child it is both cute and lighthearted - always the tucking in at night was the greatest moment of love shared. Simple and pure as most kids are when they love.
Do you remember the rhyme Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers....my kids loved to hear that from me just at bedtime, they would say "faster mummy" and I always did...faster and faster till they were laughing their heads off...Your work in this post reminds me of that moment....it felt the same to me somehow.
A simple yet beautiful expression of love. - hope I explained that well. My head is a bit of a mess at the moment.
Thanks so much for sharing this exceptional post. I loved it.
Maureen
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Maureen, you have made my day with your comments :-) Thank you so very much. I so appreciate your generous sixth star, too :-) Brooke
Comment from jmdg1954
I thoroughly enjoyed your irm about the little evil Leander who in sure is not on cahoots with Mr Sawyer...
Great po that mirrored a fantastic picture the had to be snapped at the perfect moment.
Nicely done... John
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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I thoroughly enjoyed your irm about the little evil Leander who in sure is not on cahoots with Mr Sawyer...
Great po that mirrored a fantastic picture the had to be snapped at the perfect moment.
Nicely done... John
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Thank you so very much, John :-) Brooke
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Thank you so very much, John :-) Brooke
