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Poetry about poetry

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Comment from Ronni
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Positively GORGEOUS, STUNNING, INTRIGUING,
visually and virtually encompassing! Love the
pearled metaphors, and fantastic presentation from
perfect pic to last word....

Thanks, twas lovely and luxurious read!
Love, Ronni

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2013
    It's time for another write...
    Thank you so much dear friend!
Comment from adewpearl
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lovely alliteration in silence has spoken and in stillness sings
I love the photo - is it one of your own?
nice pairing of languish and linger
I really like the imagery of the pearls
beautifully spiritual, expressive closing :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
    Thanks Brooke. Yes my photo.
Comment from xotic flotsam
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i've yet to qualify as a jeweler, so i look to you. now that i think about it, my muse is more like a box of mixed beads. i seem to write more from wildly random thoughts. i admire such mental organization. i love 'a perfectly imperfect art'. possibly the only higher Power lends perfect hands to guide you. a wonderful impleading to your muse, or perhaps your Muse. nicely crafted Jewell.
x

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
    Thanks so much for stopping in!
Comment from 9999pool
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On day of awakening, we will have seen how life is leading us. We have to open our heart string of pearls and find that moment of happiness and joy. Do not feel lost but try to find our way back into grace and glory.
Well penned and a great write indeed.
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie. :))

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
    Thanks Ritchie. :)Are you the Ritchie I already know and have met in person?
reply by 9999pool on 15-Sep-2013
    Hi dear.

    My pleasure to read for you. Smiles.
    No, I don't think I am the one but Ritchie is a very unique name here, smiles.
    Have a great weekend.
    Lots o hugs and love, Ritchie. :))
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
    Hi! :) whew....
reply by 9999pool on 15-Sep-2013
    Smiles.
    Cheerio, Ritchie. :))...
Comment from Maureen's Pen
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Dear Jewel,
Your reflective pondering seems magical to me. I enjoyed this one very much, its own power gives a sense of waking dreams, the guidance of heart and soul.
Beautiful poem, much like the bud of flower reflecting as it blooms.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
    Thanks Maureen. It's actually the beginning stanza of another piece previously written. When I reread it, it could have been THREE poems. haha. You know that stream of thought that keeps going? I KNOW YOU DO KNOW.
    HUGS, my friend.
reply by Maureen's Pen on 15-Sep-2013
    LOL - Yup I know!
    Hugs back at ya.
    m
Comment from SteveY
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Oh my gosh this is so freaking good. I love the line "Stillness sings an unsung tune; one my heart already knew. I become its composer, beguiling, searching, yielding to the litany of lines only a Power greater than I can sing over me!" Wow! That's so good. I've been contemplating writing a poem lately about "stillness." I was thinking of caling it, "Stillness Speaks." But I haven't written it yet.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
    Thanks Steve! What an awesome review. You crack me up.
    You know that poem is waiting for you....
Comment from reconciled
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I'm so happy I'm the first one to six this...-happysmile- Simply beautiful poetic inspired stardust sprinkled in golden flowing cascades of sparkling magic....standing ovation exceptional....take a bow young lady. -smile- love you Michael

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
    Haha! Thank you for those glittering stars! You rock!
Comment from Tonulak
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Dear Jewel,
Thank you for this thoughtful poem. It is homage to that rapping of the muse on the door ofour imagination. I enjoyed reading it and loved the musicality of the piece. Great job--Ted

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
    thank you dearest Ted.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, poetic visionary, you did an excellent job writing this free style poem about the creativity process of poetry. i enjoyed reading it

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2013
    yadda yadda ;)
Comment from Sasha
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I could feel your inspiration as I read this. Marvelous imagery too. I like this one very much. Bright, uplifting, and flows exceptionally well.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2013
    thank you