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My Life In A Box

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Comment from maybar
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Writing from the heart that is a child's heart that aches from being alone. I was taken back so many years to my days as a child. Excellent use of language. You want to know what the future brings.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2013

reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
    Thnk you. Blessings. Barbara
Comment from Norbanus
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For all your peeking from the shell
There's something hidden. I can tell
We hear about spice and everything nice
What of the others that must pay the price

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2013

reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
    Thank you as always sweety. Blessings. barbara
Comment from Areeba Faraz
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Your concept was very interesting, and the recurrence of 'when I was a little girl, I wasn't ' certainly added a rhythm. The poem is very abstract, and sometimes the idea remains unclear.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2013

reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
    Thank you. Blessings. Barbara
Comment from TAB_that's me
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This is an interesting and well written poem. It sounds like the girl didn't get to a a little girl - she was or had to be wise beyond her years.
~Teresa`

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2013

reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
    Thank you so much. Blessings. Barbara
Comment from SteveY
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This is just an awesomely great writing my friend. Wonderful story and an intriguing format and it was so well expressed in every way!

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2013

reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
    Thank you so much. So happy you liked it. Blessings. Barbara
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, lovnpeace, you did an excellent job writing this free verse poem about searching for the childhood that wasn't. i enjoyed reading this one..

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2013

reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
    Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm happy you liked it. Blessings. Barbara