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Small and Specialty Poems

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Comment from Dean Kuch
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This was very touching, Mr. 'T', and I thank God, each & every day of my life, that I DO get to wake up in this way, every morning. Of course, I am usually awake long before she is, having been outdoors with my eight year old Chihuahua, Gidget, to watch the sunrise. But, it still makes for a very special beginning to a brand new day...

Wonderfully done, my friend.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
    Thank you Dean. Most definitely.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
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It would be nice to wake up to a kiss every morning. This is well done and has a lot to say in a few words. I like it because I understand it. I don't understand a lot of the poems on here. Well done. Rox

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
    Thank you Rox. I know what you mean,
Comment from sunnilicious
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Single people wake up for coffee (or tea). This is true. Good poem. Good flow of rhymes. Nicely written. Excellent work. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
    Thanks sunnilicious. 'Tis sad.
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
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Woke up with a kiss Wonderful intro
If each day (would) be like this could
I'd be filled with bliss

What can I say. Sounds good to me.

Regards:


 Comment Written 06-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
    Thanks Stephen, would, could, or maybe should.
Comment from Selina Stambi
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Aw-w--w -

What a blissful way to start the day!

I'm glad I got this one. I try to be a good fan, but my mailbox get flooded so quickly, I've given up trying to keep up.

Have a wonderful weekend, Tom.

Hope she keeps those kisses keep coming ....:)

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
    Thanks Sonali. They seem to multiply when passionately returned.
reply by Selina Stambi on 07-Sep-2013
    That's how it's supposed to work ... hopefully!
Comment from Gungalo
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Woke up with a kiss
If each day would be like this
I'd be filled with bliss

I'll say hey Tom? Must have been your birthday or something. LOL such bliss reflected in a kiss.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
    Thanks Gungalo. Very close to the truth there. LOL.
reply by Gungalo on 07-Sep-2013
    LOL Tom, I'll never tell.