life
poem about the lady in the picture3 total reviews
Comment from Nichola
This seems to be an afterlife poem? After the spirit has left the body. I like your poem. Your poem has a feeling of disbelief in it, like the person in the poem cannot believe that he has died.
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This seems to be an afterlife poem? After the spirit has left the body. I like your poem. Your poem has a feeling of disbelief in it, like the person in the poem cannot believe that he has died.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
Comment from joneau2
Delightful imagery, but on the sorrowful side. You write so well, but you show your feelings on your sleeve. I enjoy your poems as I'm positive others do as well. LOL
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Delightful imagery, but on the sorrowful side. You write so well, but you show your feelings on your sleeve. I enjoy your poems as I'm positive others do as well. LOL
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
Comment from mermaids
I like the image of being in the sky and looking at the fish.
Your words capture feelings from different viewpoint. Excellent use of words and flow of lines.
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I like the image of being in the sky and looking at the fish.
Your words capture feelings from different viewpoint. Excellent use of words and flow of lines.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
