Seclusion
Acrostic-Nonet117 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
This is quite depressing, Anupam Sharma, but also, very well penned. Great examples of alliteration are present throughout here, and the ethereal style, couple with it's message, is chilling. For the faint of heart, and the weak minded...don't read without a safety net beneath you!
A very nice tribute to Cookie333. It's good to know that other authors on FS inspire you accordingly.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
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This is quite depressing, Anupam Sharma, but also, very well penned. Great examples of alliteration are present throughout here, and the ethereal style, couple with it's message, is chilling. For the faint of heart, and the weak minded...don't read without a safety net beneath you!
A very nice tribute to Cookie333. It's good to know that other authors on FS inspire you accordingly.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
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I appreciate your encouraging words and generous rating.
Yes,many great and talented people are here who are wonderful source of inspiration and knowledge for a novice like me.Thanks for your lovely review:)
Comment from Lulube
Seclusion, a place where anything goes and only you know. This poem held an eery feeling underneath it all, for me.
A tricky style and you complied spot on. Good luck in the contest
lulube
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
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Seclusion, a place where anything goes and only you know. This poem held an eery feeling underneath it all, for me.
A tricky style and you complied spot on. Good luck in the contest
lulube
Comment Written 06-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
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I am glad you liked it.Thanks for your positive comments and review
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welcome
lulube
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, which you accurately describe as an acrostic nonet seems to capture that sense that something should be right, but is not clear and all that exists is fear and a dwindling hope of change. The graphic is haunting as well.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
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This poem, which you accurately describe as an acrostic nonet seems to capture that sense that something should be right, but is not clear and all that exists is fear and a dwindling hope of change. The graphic is haunting as well.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
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I am glad you liked it.Thanks for your positive and generous review
Comment from Dutchie
This is a heartfelt poem my friend. And this acrostic nonet is really wonderful. O yes I've been there and know how it feels to be an outsider... Your words are so well chosen with smooth flow and nice alliteration. Syllable count is perfect too. Great job!! Fia
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
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This is a heartfelt poem my friend. And this acrostic nonet is really wonderful. O yes I've been there and know how it feels to be an outsider... Your words are so well chosen with smooth flow and nice alliteration. Syllable count is perfect too. Great job!! Fia
Comment Written 06-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
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I am glad you liked it.Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:)
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Your nonet is cleverly written in acrostic form as well and describes the horror of depression in powerful words. The presentation is in keeping with the tone of the poem. My best wishes for the competition, Giddy
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
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Your nonet is cleverly written in acrostic form as well and describes the horror of depression in powerful words. The presentation is in keeping with the tone of the poem. My best wishes for the competition, Giddy
Comment Written 06-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
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I am glad you liked it.Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:)
Comment from angel123
The poem is interesting and well written. I enjoyed reading it and your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts.
Angel123
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
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The poem is interesting and well written. I enjoyed reading it and your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts.
Angel123
Comment Written 06-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
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I am glad you liked it.Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:)
Comment from marijmd
Wow your work gets a lot of views! Good job there. I have read you poems before and am impressed but how much depth and passion you display in your words.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
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Wow your work gets a lot of views! Good job there. I have read you poems before and am impressed but how much depth and passion you display in your words.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
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I am glad you liked it.Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:)
Comment from DRG24
I really like this acrostic-nonet and I would presume that it is really hard.Congratulations on the awesome piece and there is a good vocabulary!!!!!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
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I really like this acrostic-nonet and I would presume that it is really hard.Congratulations on the awesome piece and there is a good vocabulary!!!!!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
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I am glad you liked it.Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:)
Comment from rjuselius
this is a morbid yet beautiful piece of poetry! the frailty of the humanmind can conjure up nearly everything.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
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this is a morbid yet beautiful piece of poetry! the frailty of the humanmind can conjure up nearly everything.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 05-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
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I am glad you liked it.Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:)
Comment from DALLAS01
This is a very creative work. Wonderful alliteration that falls into place naturally and is not forced. Not always easy to accomplish.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
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This is a very creative work. Wonderful alliteration that falls into place naturally and is not forced. Not always easy to accomplish.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
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I am glad you liked it.Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:)
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You're welcome.
