Comment from Lastamen

Excellent

A deliciously wicked reimagining of this classic bedtime tale. The entry of the characters from "clue" is equally inspiring. I was just waiting for Professor Plum to show up in some form and fashion. Well done (or should I say - "over easy")?

Till the last amen

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 Comment Written 02-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013

Thank you so much for your insightful review. Hmmm, the professor...I appreciate the generous stars and your kind remarks.

Comment from baustian64

Good

This is a delight. How clever to use other nursery and game caricature's in your work. You can read this and remember several memories of childhood.

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 Comment Written 02-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013

Thanks for reading and reviewing

Comment from boxergirl

Exceptional

How clever! I love the story you have created from this nursery rhyme. I love the AABB rhyme scheme which helps the flow of the poem from beginning to end. Well done! :-)

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013

Wow! Thank you so much for your very generous six star rating. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.