Height
Height is a measurement of the topmost from the least level6 total reviews
Comment from Glasstruth
Am a bit confused. Especially the second line, wonder what's meant by height? And early start? Maybe I'm tired and can't see the obvious? Thanks for sharing. Les
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Am a bit confused. Especially the second line, wonder what's meant by height? And early start? Maybe I'm tired and can't see the obvious? Thanks for sharing. Les
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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The beginning of the world is early start and height is how high and low a thing is
Comment from Dean Kuch
...from his lofty status on high, where only he can get by. And he said with a nod, "I'm a miserable sod," Egads, if I only could die!...
Nicely penned, waterite. It's so hard to write enough of a substantial review to a 5-7-5. However, I do try.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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...from his lofty status on high, where only he can get by. And he said with a nod, "I'm a miserable sod," Egads, if I only could die!...
Nicely penned, waterite. It's so hard to write enough of a substantial review to a 5-7-5. However, I do try.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Yes you a great,I can understand what you mean
Comment from TAB_that's me
Your second line has 8 syllables instead of the required 7 syllable for this contest. Your title is spelled wrong.
~Teresa~
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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Your second line has 8 syllables instead of the required 7 syllable for this contest. Your title is spelled wrong.
~Teresa~
Comment Written 24-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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you can send the write out corrections, okay and thank you
Comment from ronnie k
What goes must come down, but I am sure this a warning more than a fact that we must have respect and not beat a person down when he is down because there is room for you.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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What goes must come down, but I am sure this a warning more than a fact that we must have respect and not beat a person down when he is down because there is room for you.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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you mean what goes up must come down, well i don't understand why you should be looking for a fact, this can be anything imaginable, anyway i thank you and i will like you to send your corrections written out
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NO offence, I enjoyed the poem
Comment from SteveY
Nicely done my friend. Indeed who will be concerned? A very interseting twist on the subject of height! Excellent job of following the format too.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013
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Nicely done my friend. Indeed who will be concerned? A very interseting twist on the subject of height! Excellent job of following the format too.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much, but one more thing someone go against the format as not the real format and that it is 6/9/6 instead of 5/7/5
i will want you to edit for me if you can on this comment
Thank you once again
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Sorry about that. My mistake. But I still liked the story, and I believe I gave you a five!
Comment from adewpearl
You have misunderstood the rules for the 5/7/5 form/contest - You have counted words in each line instead of syllables - as a result your syllable format is 6/9/6 in stead of 5/7/5
you have a thoughtful message to deliver but need to revise the syllables :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013
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You have misunderstood the rules for the 5/7/5 form/contest - You have counted words in each line instead of syllables - as a result your syllable format is 6/9/6 in stead of 5/7/5
you have a thoughtful message to deliver but need to revise the syllables :-) Brooke
Comment Written 23-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much, i will be ready to get the correction from you, if you care
