Comment from Tina McKala

Excellent

Wow, this was a fresh poem! Yes, off course, after each and every night, sun will rise. You put it down in a very original and cute way. I really liked the ambiance you created.

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 Comment Written 20-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013

Hi, Tina. Thank you much for this awesome review! I'm finding myself quite inspired by the Lune form. :0) Bev

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.

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 Comment Written 20-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013

Thanks so much, charlie. I really appreciate your generosity! :0) Bev

reply by c_lucas on 20-Aug-2013

You're welcome, Bev. Charlie

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013

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