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Dark Night Delivers

5/3/5 Lune poem

32 total reviews 
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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DARK NIGHT DELIVERS

PERSPECTIVE

AND A FRESH, NEW DAY

a clever use of words in this short poem, Bev.

margaret

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
    Thanks so much, margaret. Always good to hear from you.

    :0) Bev
Comment from JW
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This is an interesting poem. I never thought about a dark night delivering perspective. Usually one is so deep in the fog and gloom darkness brings, it's hard to see anything else.

Thanks for sharing this. JW

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
    For me, it may take some time, but I always gain perspective.

    Thanks so much, Jonathon. Appreciate the support.

    Bev
Comment from Norbanus
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The dark night sets the stage for a better appreciation of the sunshine when it arrives. The approaching day in the picture looks like it might be foggy.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
    Thanks for the generous review, N. :0) Bev
Comment from jadapenn
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Very good concept you have here, Bev. The night might hide many things but in the end he does deliver rest and a fresh new day to most of us. Nice Lune entry. Your few words tell a full story I enjoyed. luv jada

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
    Thank you so much, jada. Sometimes the perspective comes after many long nights, but it always does seem to come for me. I appreciate you!

    Hugs, Bev
Comment from J. Dark
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I love the simplicity and the optimism of this short but well worded little gem. How fabulous to see some of your poetry submissions. This was an inspiring little write, Bev.

Kindest of regards

Julie :o)

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
    Julie, thank you so much for this gracious and generous review. I really appreciate the encouragement. Hugs, Bev
Comment from Tomes Johnston
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This is an interesting take on a dark night. It usually is used to tell some dark and disturbing tales. The author is telling that it is just the prelude to a new dawn that is full of fresh possibilities. That is very refreshing.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
    Thank you, Tomes. I appreciate your kind review. :0) Bev
reply by Tomes Johnston on 21-Aug-2013
    My pleasure.
Comment from IndianaIrish
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What a lovely poem, Bev. The night can make fear and sorrow seem like the only way to respond to things in our lives. But when the sun rises, a whole new outlook is given us to see we're not alone and there's strength in us to conquer our fears.
Smiles,
Karyn : )

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
    Hi, Karyn. Thank you for taking time to read my little poem. I appreciate your insights and lovely comments. Warmest regards, Bev
Comment from CR Delport
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Yeah, whenever something troubles me, I always try to sleep on it, because, like you say, the new day brings a fresh perspective. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
    Thank you for the lovely review, CR. :0) Bev
Comment from barkingdog
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This is one to meditate on and see where it takes you.

Most people let the night's darkness calm and renew them (give them a new perspective) for tomorrow.

Nice alliteration: Dark night delivers

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
    Thanks so much, Ellen. I'm a little looney for lunes these days LOL. xx Bev
Comment from DALLAS01
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Hey, Bev. This is great. Love the dual gift of a new perspective and a fresh new day. Many wounds has been healed in the still of the night. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
    Thanks, Dallas. I appreciate your encouragement. :0) Bev
reply by DALLAS01 on 20-Aug-2013
    :.)