Karma
If at first you don't succeed...50 total reviews
Comment from Christof McTarnahan
Great job with this. I like your usage of the words. Great flow to the story, and the subject matter was enjoyable. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Great job with this. I like your usage of the words. Great flow to the story, and the subject matter was enjoyable. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you. So glad you enjoyed it. :-)
Comment from Curly Girly
This is a fascintating story and you've told it in an inventive sort of way. I take it that you've come back to earth as a magpie bird?
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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This is a fascintating story and you've told it in an inventive sort of way. I take it that you've come back to earth as a magpie bird?
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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LOL I don't think so, but ...
Thanks for the great review.
Comment from madhatter1977
Really clever mystery writer! Like the ending especially when he turns into a crow - very suitable karma! Should do well in the contest - well done!
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Really clever mystery writer! Like the ending especially when he turns into a crow - very suitable karma! Should do well in the contest - well done!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thanks! :-)
Comment from S A Bullen
That was funny and a clever use of the 200 ish writing prompt.well done. I'm only new to this site and as yet have only entered two comps. Would like to try something like this next time. It was a sweet little read. Sheryn :-)
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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That was funny and a clever use of the 200 ish writing prompt.well done. I'm only new to this site and as yet have only entered two comps. Would like to try something like this next time. It was a sweet little read. Sheryn :-)
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you! :-)
Comment from barkingdog
So he came back as a crow instead of a man.
I think I got it right.
I didn't get the bottle top collection. Understood the choking on the apple.
:) e
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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So he came back as a crow instead of a man.
I think I got it right.
I didn't get the bottle top collection. Understood the choking on the apple.
:) e
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you. :-) Just figured crows like to collect shiny, metalic things, or so I've heard.
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So he was a crow to start with. I thought he was a man.Oh, well...
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Right. :-) First a man, second time a crow, and third time... back to being a crow. :-)
Comment from elinic414
This was great! I was confused at first, but I understood once I got to the end! My favorite line is "I'd die laughing, if I wasn't, well... you know". I think I would honestly read this if it were extended into a novel... from the crow's perspective. The crow reminds me of Salem from Sabrina the Teenage Witch - reincarnated with a wicked sense of humor. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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This was great! I was confused at first, but I understood once I got to the end! My favorite line is "I'd die laughing, if I wasn't, well... you know". I think I would honestly read this if it were extended into a novel... from the crow's perspective. The crow reminds me of Salem from Sabrina the Teenage Witch - reincarnated with a wicked sense of humor. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you! :-)
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A very creative write following the confines of the contest rules. Good use of humor and it is a complete story in so few words. Well done. Good luck in the contest~Debbie
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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A very creative write following the confines of the contest rules. Good use of humor and it is a complete story in so few words. Well done. Good luck in the contest~Debbie
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you! :-)
Comment from Jokerswild
Ah Karma! What a nicely formed piece of writing using those words extremely well and to good advantage. The final turn about is a wonderful twist and made me laugh out loud. Nice work.
Jackie
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Ah Karma! What a nicely formed piece of writing using those words extremely well and to good advantage. The final turn about is a wonderful twist and made me laugh out loud. Nice work.
Jackie
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much. :-)
Comment from w.j.debi
Humorous tale of reincarnation, or so the character was hoping. Looks like he is stuck for a while longer....Good descriptions and narration. You worked the required words smoothly into the story.Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Humorous tale of reincarnation, or so the character was hoping. Looks like he is stuck for a while longer....Good descriptions and narration. You worked the required words smoothly into the story.Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much. :-)
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this story about the man who didn't eat enough crow had to come back as a crow again. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest
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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this story about the man who didn't eat enough crow had to come back as a crow again. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you. :-)
