Karma
If at first you don't succeed...50 total reviews
Comment from Zue65
The reincarnation thing here is fused with Christian teachings of angels and of spirits coming back to fulfill a mission, blended with the reincarnation principles of going back in another life form until you learn to rectify the errors committed in the previous life. Nice, funny twist at the end of the story. God bless.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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The reincarnation thing here is fused with Christian teachings of angels and of spirits coming back to fulfill a mission, blended with the reincarnation principles of going back in another life form until you learn to rectify the errors committed in the previous life. Nice, funny twist at the end of the story. God bless.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. :-)
Comment from Gungalo
Pretty funny I say. It goes to show you that the angels have the ultimate say in who goes and who does not. Brilliant having the crow there at the end.
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Pretty funny I say. It goes to show you that the angels have the ultimate say in who goes and who does not. Brilliant having the crow there at the end.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you. So glad you enjoyed it. :-)
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Comment from harmony13
An unique story! The story flowed and connected well.
The author was very creative and the story was thought
provoking. The artwork was unique and enhanced the read.
Thank you, harmony13
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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An unique story! The story flowed and connected well.
The author was very creative and the story was thought
provoking. The artwork was unique and enhanced the read.
Thank you, harmony13
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you. So glad you enjoyed it. :-)
Comment from jb wade
So very funny and original. Enjoyed this immensely. Keep up the good work. Thanks for sharing with us. I like the images. The dialogue is spot on!. I needed a good laugh. Still laughing.
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So very funny and original. Enjoyed this immensely. Keep up the good work. Thanks for sharing with us. I like the images. The dialogue is spot on!. I needed a good laugh. Still laughing.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you. So glad you enjoyed it. :-)
Comment from Tina McKala
This was really an interesting take on this prompt, original and funny story. A lot is said in between the lines and that makes it even more enjoyable. Very good job!
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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This was really an interesting take on this prompt, original and funny story. A lot is said in between the lines and that makes it even more enjoyable. Very good job!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you. So glad you enjoyed it. :-)
Comment from barleygirl
Very unusual & unique & creative approach to this contest assignment. I wasn't even thinking about the words that needed to be used, as the story itself was central to the writing. I had to focus on the story & reread, becuz it was a little hard to follow. I'm still not feeling 100% dialed in on what's going on in this story -- I'm better at straightforward stories. But still, it's good writing. Good luck!
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Very unusual & unique & creative approach to this contest assignment. I wasn't even thinking about the words that needed to be used, as the story itself was central to the writing. I had to focus on the story & reread, becuz it was a little hard to follow. I'm still not feeling 100% dialed in on what's going on in this story -- I'm better at straightforward stories. But still, it's good writing. Good luck!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you. :-)
Comment from RodG
I like the black humor here. Your characterization of the victim/Maude's husband is very good in just 200 words. Good use of interior MONOLOG to propel the plot. Witty ending!
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I like the black humor here. Your characterization of the victim/Maude's husband is very good in just 200 words. Good use of interior MONOLOG to propel the plot. Witty ending!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you. So glad you enjoyed it. :-)
Comment from bluemlein
Deft touch and a twisted, unexpected ending - clearly this is written by someone with not just imagination but talent and experience. VERY enjoyable.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Deft touch and a twisted, unexpected ending - clearly this is written by someone with not just imagination but talent and experience. VERY enjoyable.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you. So glad you enjoyed it. :-)
Comment from sibhus
Wow, that's a pretty interesting take on reincarnation, and makes for a good story. You've used the required very well as I had to look for them. Excellent entry for the contest and good luck.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Wow, that's a pretty interesting take on reincarnation, and makes for a good story. You've used the required very well as I had to look for them. Excellent entry for the contest and good luck.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you. So glad you enjoyed it. :-)
Comment from Spitfire
A reincarnated crow! How unique. Great touch with the bottle caps that freaked Maude how when she carried you to the dumpster. Love the ending. So far and now so close. LOL
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A reincarnated crow! How unique. Great touch with the bottle caps that freaked Maude how when she carried you to the dumpster. Love the ending. So far and now so close. LOL
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you. So glad you enjoyed it. :-)
