Little Poems
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Comment from Sararb
Very nice job with this one. I can still remember those euphoric feelings from a kiss. I especially remember that first kiss. It left me in a trance for days. LOL Sara :)
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Very nice job with this one. I can still remember those euphoric feelings from a kiss. I especially remember that first kiss. It left me in a trance for days. LOL Sara :)
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thanks Sara. Fond memories.
Comment from Dickleeshia
The author is conveying a euphoric mental condition wherein she seems to be on Cloud 9 everytime she see the love of her life--even day or night. Just a kiss or even a mere sight can send her to the high heavens.Thanks for sharing.
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The author is conveying a euphoric mental condition wherein she seems to be on Cloud 9 everytime she see the love of her life--even day or night. Just a kiss or even a mere sight can send her to the high heavens.Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
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Thank you Dickleeshia.
Comment from Eigle Rull
This nice little poem fills the needs for a Freud Poem. Although I don't care for short poems like these, this one was very nicely written. Your subject was homed in on with just the right words to convey its meaning, and your thoughts to the poem. I actually liked it very much.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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This nice little poem fills the needs for a Freud Poem. Although I don't care for short poems like these, this one was very nicely written. Your subject was homed in on with just the right words to convey its meaning, and your thoughts to the poem. I actually liked it very much.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thank you Eigle.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Euphoria, that spiritual high that beats any man-made chemical creation. The elation felt when you're fist child is born, or takes his or her first steps, utters their first word...That's one of the times I can recall feeling euphoric...
Great topic, as always Mr. 'T' And the poem itself, from format to composition, was excellent!
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Euphoria, that spiritual high that beats any man-made chemical creation. The elation felt when you're fist child is born, or takes his or her first steps, utters their first word...That's one of the times I can recall feeling euphoric...
Great topic, as always Mr. 'T' And the poem itself, from format to composition, was excellent!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much Dean.
Comment from Zue65
In like this Freud poem, and this vessel carried well the euphoria of the author in his message about the highest state of mind, the bliss in a kiss, which is the best thing that will ever gonna happen to an individual. Well done, God bless.
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In like this Freud poem, and this vessel carried well the euphoria of the author in his message about the highest state of mind, the bliss in a kiss, which is the best thing that will ever gonna happen to an individual. Well done, God bless.
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
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Thank you Nassus,
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is a new form for me, it is quite difficult. I like very much the message you convey in this poem, Treischel. One niggle though, Euphoria, I think is has 4 syllables. It is the only one that is out, unless I am saying it wrong. I hope you don't mind me asking that. It is still a lovely form of poetry and your words are lovely too. xsx Sandra
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This is a new form for me, it is quite difficult. I like very much the message you convey in this poem, Treischel. One niggle though, Euphoria, I think is has 4 syllables. It is the only one that is out, unless I am saying it wrong. I hope you don't mind me asking that. It is still a lovely form of poetry and your words are lovely too. xsx Sandra
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thanks Sandra, I took Poetic license to pronounce it with Three syllables as
U-4-ya.
