Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 75 "Euphoria"Small and Specialty Poems
16 total reviews
Comment from mauial
Bliss with lift brings you high, I like that and the rest of the poem and how you met the requirements of this form of poetry. First time I seen this form and I think I have to give it a try.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
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Bliss with lift brings you high, I like that and the rest of the poem and how you met the requirements of this form of poetry. First time I seen this form and I think I have to give it a try.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
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Thank you Mauial.
Comment from Steve Pantazis
With a poem titled "Euphoria," one Freudian question comes to mind: What were you smoking when you wrote it? A Freudian answer might be, "My mother's underwear." Kidding aside, nice piece.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
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With a poem titled "Euphoria," one Freudian question comes to mind: What were you smoking when you wrote it? A Freudian answer might be, "My mother's underwear." Kidding aside, nice piece.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
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Thank you Steve, it was Mellow Yellow.
Comment from watergirl
Well, you say it well, a lift is what it is. I liked reading your poem, You did well to conform to those rules of the Frued Poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Well, you say it well, a lift is what it is. I liked reading your poem, You did well to conform to those rules of the Frued Poem. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Thank you water girl for visiting nod taking the time to offer comment.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
An interesting style of poetry and quite effective.
A great subject choice and a feeling many would like to experience more often.
Your carefully chosen words define euphoria perfectly and the poem is formatted well. A GREAT PRESENTATION.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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An interesting style of poetry and quite effective.
A great subject choice and a feeling many would like to experience more often.
Your carefully chosen words define euphoria perfectly and the poem is formatted well. A GREAT PRESENTATION.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Thank you seken. You honor Me.
Comment from denhagan
This was an interesting Freud poem--a new one to me--about Euphoria. Had the correct number of syllables per line, and correct number of lines and stanzas.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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This was an interesting Freud poem--a new one to me--about Euphoria. Had the correct number of syllables per line, and correct number of lines and stanzas.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Thank you denhagan.
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You're welcome
Comment from Joan E.
Thank for your creating another example of this new form. I liked your uplifting interpretation and your addition of rhymes. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Thank for your creating another example of this new form. I liked your uplifting interpretation and your addition of rhymes. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Thank you Joan. You rock!
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And now I will be rocked to sleep. Good night and sweet dreams... -Joan
Comment from ann marie mazz
hello tom
may I say as the creator of "freud"
you have written it perfectly
three three and three
and yes
the state of mind is present
your presentation and illustration are fabulous
everything is well within this entry
I thank you for sharing
I thank you for utilizing my little format
your entry gives life to "freud"
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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hello tom
may I say as the creator of "freud"
you have written it perfectly
three three and three
and yes
the state of mind is present
your presentation and illustration are fabulous
everything is well within this entry
I thank you for sharing
I thank you for utilizing my little format
your entry gives life to "freud"
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for that wonderful creator's seal of approval.
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it is I who thank you
and yes
you are most welcome
enjoy the night
ann marie
Comment from sunnilicious
It's also a scent by Calvin Klein. Good poem. The state of euphoria is something we all want to attain. I think it's the same as nirvana or paradise. Nice artwork.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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It's also a scent by Calvin Klein. Good poem. The state of euphoria is something we all want to attain. I think it's the same as nirvana or paradise. Nice artwork.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thank you sunnilicious. Yes, I think it is.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel
This is an excellent freud poem. It meets requirements of the form;3 syllables/line, 3/lines per stanz, 3 stanza limit.
Must describe a state of mind. I do not know what you mean by euphoria being the highest state of mind unless you mean being high on drugs.
Preston
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Hi, Treischel
This is an excellent freud poem. It meets requirements of the form;3 syllables/line, 3/lines per stanz, 3 stanza limit.
Must describe a state of mind. I do not know what you mean by euphoria being the highest state of mind unless you mean being high on drugs.
Preston
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thanks Preston. You got it.
Comment from 9999pool
Now after reading this write i am more than euphoric and usually i am in this state of highest joy when writing.
It aptly and accurately described my state of mind as i write.
Truly brilliant piece. As we know, to write a Freud with only 3 syllables and only 9 lines in total, is not easy.
You took up the challenge and let us know what euphoria is in your own brilliant words.
The 1st stanza nailed in the whole message about euphoria. Wish we are euphoric every day too, smiles.
Cheerio, best, Ritchie. :))
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Now after reading this write i am more than euphoric and usually i am in this state of highest joy when writing.
It aptly and accurately described my state of mind as i write.
Truly brilliant piece. As we know, to write a Freud with only 3 syllables and only 9 lines in total, is not easy.
You took up the challenge and let us know what euphoria is in your own brilliant words.
The 1st stanza nailed in the whole message about euphoria. Wish we are euphoric every day too, smiles.
Cheerio, best, Ritchie. :))
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thank you Ritchie. Your review made me very very happy. Even euphoric.
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Hi Tom,
This write you did your best and usually you do extremely well when given a challenge, smiles. This is not an easy write by any means. it has to make the readers feel the euphoria but the lightness of this write is the secret. Smiles.
Cheerio, enjoy your euphoria and please churned out more great stuff like this, Tom, smiles. best, Ritchie.
