My Faith Restores
a rondeau185 total reviews
Comment from amarherig14
Very uplifting message in your faith poem. There is nothing that can stand between a believer and his/her faith.When dark clouds in life start to interfere with peace,"My faith restores." Good alliteration in:d,h,w ,s.
The picture used is a good choice for your write.Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Very uplifting message in your faith poem. There is nothing that can stand between a believer and his/her faith.When dark clouds in life start to interfere with peace,"My faith restores." Good alliteration in:d,h,w ,s.
The picture used is a good choice for your write.Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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amarherig, thank you so very much for your thoughtful comments, your kind contest wishes and your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
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You are welcome,Brooke. Blessings,Margie
Comment from Bryana
Dear Brooke, your poem is absolutely beautiful. I also love the dawn when dark is gone. It's always a pleasure to read your work specially a rondeau like this one.
I wish you god luck in the contest. Hugs
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Dear Brooke, your poem is absolutely beautiful. I also love the dawn when dark is gone. It's always a pleasure to read your work specially a rondeau like this one.
I wish you god luck in the contest. Hugs
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Bryana, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Shirley B
Dear Brooke, I really like the repeating line of 'my faith restores.' That one line says it all. I really enjoy this style of poetry. You make all styles of poetry seem so easy. Great job, Shirley
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Dear Brooke, I really like the repeating line of 'my faith restores.' That one line says it all. I really enjoy this style of poetry. You make all styles of poetry seem so easy. Great job, Shirley
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Shirley, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from TELLER OF TALES
Beautiful sketch by the author, it is very reassuring, this work by the author is very powerful it's words are filled with confidence and love, FROM THE TELLER OF TALES....they Are words that soothe the soul...AND THE HEART........
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Beautiful sketch by the author, it is very reassuring, this work by the author is very powerful it's words are filled with confidence and love, FROM THE TELLER OF TALES....they Are words that soothe the soul...AND THE HEART........
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Teller of Tales, thank you so much for your gracious review :-) Brooke
Comment from Liz Dunbee
I love this. It is so beautiful. The words are lovely and the picture is amazing. Just what I needed to read today. I always love your little lessons. I think I have learnt a lot from you. Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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I love this. It is so beautiful. The words are lovely and the picture is amazing. Just what I needed to read today. I always love your little lessons. I think I have learnt a lot from you. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Liz, thank you so very much for your thoughtful response to this poem and for your generous exceptional rating :-) Brooke
Comment from Treischel
That Rondeau is a beautiful format in that it creates wonderful poetry. It is very difficult to write because there are only 2 rhymes that cover through 15 lines. You expressed it well in this lovely piece about faith. It is both spiritual and lyrical. Great picture too.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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That Rondeau is a beautiful format in that it creates wonderful poetry. It is very difficult to write because there are only 2 rhymes that cover through 15 lines. You expressed it well in this lovely piece about faith. It is both spiritual and lyrical. Great picture too.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Treischel, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Ridley Williams
This is a wonderful declaration of faith in tomorrow, and faith to overcome the trials of life. I love the idea of a song to help restore the positive feelings. A very inspirational write, Brooke, well done, Bill
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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This is a wonderful declaration of faith in tomorrow, and faith to overcome the trials of life. I love the idea of a song to help restore the positive feelings. A very inspirational write, Brooke, well done, Bill
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Bill, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from DanielEkine
This contest should be an easy one for you. It's a beautiful work. Great stanza application.
My best stanza, "At times when troubles last too long
and keep the cloak of darkness drawn,
when sorrow has me in its sights,
my faith restores."
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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This contest should be an easy one for you. It's a beautiful work. Great stanza application.
My best stanza, "At times when troubles last too long
and keep the cloak of darkness drawn,
when sorrow has me in its sights,
my faith restores."
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thank you so very much, Daniel :-) Brooke
Comment from Rondeno
What a gentle, sincere expression of one poet's personal belief. As always in your poetry, a totally positive and wholesome consciousness finds perfect expression via exquisitely crafted language.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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What a gentle, sincere expression of one poet's personal belief. As always in your poetry, a totally positive and wholesome consciousness finds perfect expression via exquisitely crafted language.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Michael, thank you so much for your thoughtful comments and for your generous rating :-) Brooke
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Really nicely done. I just spent 2 days at Willow Creek Leadership Summit. Talk about having your faith restored, or at least a shot in the arm. Was so great! This is very well done as always. Hope you do well in the contest. Rox
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Really nicely done. I just spent 2 days at Willow Creek Leadership Summit. Talk about having your faith restored, or at least a shot in the arm. Was so great! This is very well done as always. Hope you do well in the contest. Rox
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Rox, thank you so much for your kind contest wishes and thoughtful review :-) Brooke
