My Faith Restores
a rondeau185 total reviews
Comment from Deniz22
Hi Brooke, love this for its simplicity and truth. It reminds me of this verse from the Psalms:
Psalm 89:1; I will sing of the Lord's great love forever;
with my mouth I will make your faithfulness known through all generations.
2 I will declare that your love stands firm forever, that you have established your faithfulness in heaven itself. Blessings, Dennis
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Hi Brooke, love this for its simplicity and truth. It reminds me of this verse from the Psalms:
Psalm 89:1; I will sing of the Lord's great love forever;
with my mouth I will make your faithfulness known through all generations.
2 I will declare that your love stands firm forever, that you have established your faithfulness in heaven itself. Blessings, Dennis
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thank you, Dennis, for your thoughtful response to this poem of faith :-) Brooke
Comment from Alankrita
the poem, itself, is of course amazing but what i truly marvel is the difficulty you must have faced while writing it. its such a hard format to write upon and yet, you have done it, and written it very well on top of that.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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the poem, itself, is of course amazing but what i truly marvel is the difficulty you must have faced while writing it. its such a hard format to write upon and yet, you have done it, and written it very well on top of that.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Alankrita, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Jaq Cee
"There is no place where dark belongs
within a heart that hears hope's songs -- "
So true Brooke.
This is a fantastic rondeau, well written with very descriptive words that aided to the imagery.
Rhyming and flow are sublime as ever. :) Jaq xx
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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"There is no place where dark belongs
within a heart that hears hope's songs -- "
So true Brooke.
This is a fantastic rondeau, well written with very descriptive words that aided to the imagery.
Rhyming and flow are sublime as ever. :) Jaq xx
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Jaq, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from mrsmajor
The form is perfection, your words are so well chosen, the message a beautiful one..my very favorite line...
"There is no place where dark belongs within a heart that hears hope's song"...Indeed I can feel the meaning of that line....No place where dark belongs!
Thanks for sharing this beautiful rondeau poem, I like the form too...picture is lovely also...
Big Hugs, and Smiles
Victoria :-)
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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The form is perfection, your words are so well chosen, the message a beautiful one..my very favorite line...
"There is no place where dark belongs within a heart that hears hope's song"...Indeed I can feel the meaning of that line....No place where dark belongs!
Thanks for sharing this beautiful rondeau poem, I like the form too...picture is lovely also...
Big Hugs, and Smiles
Victoria :-)
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Victoria, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
You are mot welcome, it was my pleasure!
You are most welcome, it was my pleasure!
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is a fine and uplifting poem from the author. The writer manages to get a strong religious message across to the reader. The main message is that with God by our side, there is nothing that we cannot achieve.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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This is a fine and uplifting poem from the author. The writer manages to get a strong religious message across to the reader. The main message is that with God by our side, there is nothing that we cannot achieve.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much, Tomes :-) Brooke
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My pleasure.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
A beautifully written rondeau,
the flow to the words, and to both
rhythm and rhyme, all excellent, Brooke...
with your faith shining through.
Margaret
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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A beautifully written rondeau,
the flow to the words, and to both
rhythm and rhyme, all excellent, Brooke...
with your faith shining through.
Margaret
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thanks so much, Margaret :-) Brooke
Comment from Teresa Paul
I loved this beautiful and so very well written poem. The gentle cadence of your words led smoothly to each new stanza. I have never heard of this type of poetry. As I look at the requirements you have certainly have done a fantastic job. Teresa.
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I loved this beautiful and so very well written poem. The gentle cadence of your words led smoothly to each new stanza. I have never heard of this type of poetry. As I look at the requirements you have certainly have done a fantastic job. Teresa.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Teresa, thank you so much for your thoughtful response to this poem and for your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
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You are most welcome. The pleasure was mine. Teresa.
Comment from words
I do love this repeating form,and you use it so beautifully. I do love the three repeats ... threes are a wonderful pattern. If I ever turn to a rhyming form, this will be the one.
Wonderful, uplifting statement of faith.
Guess, I have to wait until September to light you up with all of the stars that you deserve.
Hugs, d
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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I do love this repeating form,and you use it so beautifully. I do love the three repeats ... threes are a wonderful pattern. If I ever turn to a rhyming form, this will be the one.
Wonderful, uplifting statement of faith.
Guess, I have to wait until September to light you up with all of the stars that you deserve.
Hugs, d
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Diane, thank you :-) Sending you and those babies smiles! :-) Brooke
Comment from jaded831
Very inspirational. It's so wonderful to go to God, not only when we are troubled and afraid, but in joyful times as well. Both times most definitely restores our faith. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Very inspirational. It's so wonderful to go to God, not only when we are troubled and afraid, but in joyful times as well. Both times most definitely restores our faith. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Jaded, thank you so much for your kind contest wishes and for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Adri7enne
Just lovely, Brookes. I love that short repeated line in the last two stanzas. They seem to cap off the rhythm. Nice form this Rondeau. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Just lovely, Brookes. I love that short repeated line in the last two stanzas. They seem to cap off the rhythm. Nice form this Rondeau. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Adrienne, thank you for your kind contest wishes and thoughtful review :-) Brooke
