My Faith Restores
a rondeau185 total reviews
Comment from Stephanie Kay
After I finished reading the poem, I scrolled backup to see if this was a faith contest inspired poem. And it is :)
My Faith Restores is an honest portrayal of the power of love, while at the same time acknowledging that there are times when we doubt. But then again, faith restores.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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After I finished reading the poem, I scrolled backup to see if this was a faith contest inspired poem. And it is :)
My Faith Restores is an honest portrayal of the power of love, while at the same time acknowledging that there are times when we doubt. But then again, faith restores.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Stephanie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from playinaround
BEAUTIFUL! This poem is so inspiring and encouraging to hang on in the darkness. This could be a anthem for depression.. This is beautifully worded. Love it: Another winner!
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BEAUTIFUL! This poem is so inspiring and encouraging to hang on in the darkness. This could be a anthem for depression.. This is beautifully worded. Love it: Another winner!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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playinaround, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review and your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from Starlit Ink
Faith can restore, even after the darkest night or the saddest day. Your meter is strong, with simple wording and deep meaning. The comparison of day and night works perfectly with the meaning of faith. I like the peaceful presentation that you chose. You should do nicely with this strong entry.
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Faith can restore, even after the darkest night or the saddest day. Your meter is strong, with simple wording and deep meaning. The comparison of day and night works perfectly with the meaning of faith. I like the peaceful presentation that you chose. You should do nicely with this strong entry.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
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Starlit Ink, thank you so much for your thoughtful response to t his poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
YES THIS IS WELL WRITTEN MY FRIEND SHOWING HOW STRONG A PERSONS FAITH CAN BE IT IS EASY ALL THEY HAVE TO DO IS TRUST AND BELIEVE WELL DONE I ENJOYED REGARDS JILL
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YES THIS IS WELL WRITTEN MY FRIEND SHOWING HOW STRONG A PERSONS FAITH CAN BE IT IS EASY ALL THEY HAVE TO DO IS TRUST AND BELIEVE WELL DONE I ENJOYED REGARDS JILL
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
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Jill, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from AprilShower
I enjoyed reading this poem, Brooke. Good luck on the contest. I'll have look at this contest. The colors and the picture certainly good well together. Well done.
It looks like it would be fun to write a poem like this. If I decide to enter, I think I've already have a title for it.
April :o)
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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I enjoyed reading this poem, Brooke. Good luck on the contest. I'll have look at this contest. The colors and the picture certainly good well together. Well done.
It looks like it would be fun to write a poem like this. If I decide to enter, I think I've already have a title for it.
April :o)
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
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April, thank you so very much :-) I hope you have fun writing your entry :-) Brooke
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Brooke,
You have written a lovely rondeau for the faith contest. The picture and colors just enhance your expressive words. You have a solid rhyme and the phrasing is impeccable. Well done and good luck in the contest....blessings, chey
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Hi Brooke,
You have written a lovely rondeau for the faith contest. The picture and colors just enhance your expressive words. You have a solid rhyme and the phrasing is impeccable. Well done and good luck in the contest....blessings, chey
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Chey, thank you so very much for your kind contest wishes and thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from hari anand
Life huddled in night, stirs with morning light, is so beautiful . We all move as our faith restores, I wish to learn daDUM. Extraoridary .....
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Life huddled in night, stirs with morning light, is so beautiful . We all move as our faith restores, I wish to learn daDUM. Extraoridary .....
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Mbabills, thank you so very much :-) I appreciate your thoughtful review and generous sixth star. If you want to learn more about meter, you should take one of my poetry classes :-) Brooke
Comment from God's Writer
A very beautiful poem and just what I needed to read today. Thank you for sharing such an uplifting poem for me.
Shalom,
Erick
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A very beautiful poem and just what I needed to read today. Thank you for sharing such an uplifting poem for me.
Shalom,
Erick
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
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Erick, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from colow_201185
Great work. That faithful feeling that no matter what life throws your way there is light at the end of the tunnel. Great rhyme scheme, even better message. Thanks for posting.
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Great work. That faithful feeling that no matter what life throws your way there is light at the end of the tunnel. Great rhyme scheme, even better message. Thanks for posting.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
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colow, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Jewell McChesney
Such fabulous writing here! The rondeau is one I've not done and should try. Thanks for inspiring me to try new forms.
I don't know when I'd try it, but that may come.
Better yet is the content of your poem and its message. You know how I feel about faith and you present it beautifully within your well crafted lines. Free of forceful religion, you just express it in freedom. Love that.
Jewell
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Such fabulous writing here! The rondeau is one I've not done and should try. Thanks for inspiring me to try new forms.
I don't know when I'd try it, but that may come.
Better yet is the content of your poem and its message. You know how I feel about faith and you present it beautifully within your well crafted lines. Free of forceful religion, you just express it in freedom. Love that.
Jewell
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much, Jewell. I really appreciate your response to the message of this poem and do hope you give the rondeau a try :-) Brooke
