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time to your house in order and stop the cock and bull stories of poor pitiful boohoo you----------------------
--------------get a grip on life-you might like what you find

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2013

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'Love"
"As I look away at my love for you dear,
is there anything else that I can do?
I will lasso a star and launch a planet
and after I'm through, I'll name it after you!
...
"I'll collect all the moonbeams in Country
Writers Alcoholic Jar, and release them all to
a place so far!
And after I'm done my dear, I'll marry you,
create your child sand then and lonely then
will you realize that true Love is a gift from above!Note to reviewer- This is a "Slammed Poem written in less then three minutes.
I have to love poem books written, one partially her.
But your ignorance is alarming and I hope and pray to
God that you never lose your only son and then your
only wife EIGHT MONTHS LATER!!!
Forever Soon
We'll be.... (rhyming free verse - Jaq Cee) Pays: One point.
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Reflections of Extreme Pain!.
Chapter 29 of the book Me Book




Excellent
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time to your house in order and stop the cock and bull stories of poor pitiful boohoo you----------------------
--------------get a grip on life-you might like what you find



Comment Written 10-Aug-2013 by country ranch writer




Reply: 'Love"
"As I look away at my love for you dear,
is there anything else that I can do?
I will lasso a star and launch a planet
and after I'm through, I'll name it after you!
...
"I'll collect all the moonbeams in Country
Writers Alcoholic Jar, and release them all to
a place so far!
And after I'm done my dear, I'll marry you,
create your child sand then and lonely then
will you realize that true Love is a gift from above!Note to reviewer- This is a "Slammed Poem written in less then three minutes.
I have to love poem books written, one partially her.
But your ignorance is alarming and I hope and pray to
God that you never lose your only son and then your
only wife EIGHT MONTHS LATER!!!
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Reflections of Extreme Pain!.
Chapter 29 of the book Me Book




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This is really true. Lovely and done nicely.
Nice concept.
My best part, ""Here I go again, reflecting and protecting. Never any time or me drifting away in my lost Humanity. Here I am abounded again in my place of "Heavenly Grace>'
Visions of purple Hearts aches persists as my brain remains the same! ... 'Resist the depressions, a life filled with regressions! ; >>> "
Appears more as a story format.



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Writing For Your Life!
Chapter 2 of the book "The Gift of Life."




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The excruciating mourning must come to an end. Something easily dies in us; our possession of something else. To live again is harder still. Not just to exist with memories. After all life is our first reality, maybe all we have. I say this as one who has borne loss too. -Ekim777



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Comment from DanielEkine

Excellent

This is really true. Lovely and done nicely.
Nice concept.
My best part, ""Here I go again, reflecting and protecting. Never any time or me drifting away in my lost Humanity. Here I am abounded again in my place of "Heavenly Grace>'
Visions of purple Hearts aches persists as my brain remains the same! ... 'Resist the depressions, a life filled with regressions! ; >>> "
Appears more as a story format.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013

Thanks Daniel.
A writer Country ranch, just told me to get on with my life and stop writing these "Bull Stories."
Back me with a crap review on him or her pa-leeze!
Thanks,
Richard.