From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "The Face that always loves you"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
32 total reviews
Comment from gene roush
Very sweet.
I believe all poetry should be read aloud. This piece has an encouraging voice.
Nice imagery and a great message -- strength and hope arise from within.
Thanks for sharing
Gene
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Very sweet.
I believe all poetry should be read aloud. This piece has an encouraging voice.
Nice imagery and a great message -- strength and hope arise from within.
Thanks for sharing
Gene
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thanks so much gene roush and I'm delighted to have your review and also glad to meet you ! I hope to see you often. All the best for now... HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment from kiwijenny
A face to love you at all times ...I love this....it reminds me of this verse
2 Corinthians 3:18
English Standard Version (ESV)
18 And we all, with unveiled face, beholding the glory of the Lord,[a] are being transformed into the same image from one degree of glory to another. For this comes from the Lord who is the Spirit.
Isn't God wonderful? That we can be transformed into His image .
God bless
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2013
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A face to love you at all times ...I love this....it reminds me of this verse
2 Corinthians 3:18
English Standard Version (ESV)
18 And we all, with unveiled face, beholding the glory of the Lord,[a] are being transformed into the same image from one degree of glory to another. For this comes from the Lord who is the Spirit.
Isn't God wonderful? That we can be transformed into His image .
God bless
Comment Written 06-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2013
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Thank so much for your beautiful review and I'm glad it took you to 2nd Corinthians! Wouldn't it be wonderful if everyone knew the power of belief and really understood we are all a real part of GOD...including God's Face?? Blessings to you Jenny. Vance
Comment from Bobby Jo
I do absolutely love this. It is so true that we are worth more than we ever want to believe, especially being created in God's image. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2013
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I do absolutely love this. It is so true that we are worth more than we ever want to believe, especially being created in God's image. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2013
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Dear Bobby Jo..so many thanks for your lovely review and I'm so delighted that you enjoyed this and it had genuine meaning for you....God truly loves us all and always wants to guide us in every moment of our life. Just a couple minutes in the mirror every day would certainly be worth God's Acknowledgement and even a smile and a wink would be loved! Blessings: Vance
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
This is a really very nice poem and a very good idea you had when writing this. Your first four stanzas were all 6 syllables per line then the style changed but I don't care too much about that because it read well and the words were lovely. Regards Dorothy ps The picture is adorable.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2013
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This is a really very nice poem and a very good idea you had when writing this. Your first four stanzas were all 6 syllables per line then the style changed but I don't care too much about that because it read well and the words were lovely. Regards Dorothy ps The picture is adorable.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2013
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Thanks so much Dorothy, I really appreciate your kind review and meaningful reflections on this work. Nice to meet you and hope to see you often...all the best: HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment from Titan Black
Yes, the reflection in the mirror of reflections
can be beautiful when your liveing right. And
you paint a very vivid picture of that. And I like
that. You did great with this piece.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2013
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Yes, the reflection in the mirror of reflections
can be beautiful when your liveing right. And
you paint a very vivid picture of that. And I like
that. You did great with this piece.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much Titan...I appreciate your kind remarks and hope to see you back again soon. Kindest Regards; HIS GRAYNESS
Comment from Cookie333
This one flowed perfectly, rhymed just fine, and the message deserves nothing less than the best I might give. Love yourself, trust in Him, and each day is a new day.
thank you my friend for this gentle reminder,
k
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2013
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This one flowed perfectly, rhymed just fine, and the message deserves nothing less than the best I might give. Love yourself, trust in Him, and each day is a new day.
thank you my friend for this gentle reminder,
k
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2013
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THANK YOU SO MUCH Cookie...and btw I love your name! AND the very generous six stars. So glad you enjoyed it and so glad to see we share the same gratitude for "HIM". Blessings: HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment from PhysioRuss
Well written. Good flow, nice rhythm, nice rhyming.
Above all though, great content. The point you have free choice and there is always someone to love 'if you choose it' is very well made.
If everyone chose to became someone they themselves could love the world would be a much better place.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2013
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Well written. Good flow, nice rhythm, nice rhyming.
Above all though, great content. The point you have free choice and there is always someone to love 'if you choose it' is very well made.
If everyone chose to became someone they themselves could love the world would be a much better place.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2013
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Thanks so much for your kind review and certainly glad to see you visit my work! I shall do the same and visit you as well and hope to see you back again soon! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
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You will be welcome on my page and I will most definitely be back on yours in the very near future. Russell
Comment from JB Lynn
Very nice rhythm in this piece - it helped me read through your poem with ease. Mirrors have always been powerful symbols in literature and yet you've managed to find a fresh way to present the humble mirror in this piece. I know it's not part of the poem, but I also appreciated the comment you made under Author's Notes. I wish more people understood this important message. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2013
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Very nice rhythm in this piece - it helped me read through your poem with ease. Mirrors have always been powerful symbols in literature and yet you've managed to find a fresh way to present the humble mirror in this piece. I know it's not part of the poem, but I also appreciated the comment you made under Author's Notes. I wish more people understood this important message. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2013
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Dear JB Lynn: thank you so very much for your lovely review and I'm so delighted that you enjoyed this work and certainly glad that you share the message. All the best and please come back soon. Cheers and Blessings! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment from DR DIP
fk! i love this!...that is beautifully written you old grey bastard! haha seriously your highness i really enjoyed it
the only line i would have revisited and this is purely my opinion for the flow is the last line..possibly would have written:
"And our meeting would come at this very time
When you needed to know that you will be fine
So keep a small mirror wherever you go
And know the face that will always love you so
dip
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2013
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fk! i love this!...that is beautifully written you old grey bastard! haha seriously your highness i really enjoyed it
the only line i would have revisited and this is purely my opinion for the flow is the last line..possibly would have written:
"And our meeting would come at this very time
When you needed to know that you will be fine
So keep a small mirror wherever you go
And know the face that will always love you so
dip
Comment Written 01-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2013
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Dear Dr. Dip: thanks so much for your meaningful review..I'm honored and hope to see you again: HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment from connectadi
Appreciate it. Well described and well written. I could connect to it. Words rhymed very well. The words used for rhyming is such a bliss. The whole piece of poem is wonderful but the stanza that touched is,
"I created light to present My reflection
To chase the dark for your protection
So join me now in gratitude
That you may choose your attitude".
It soothes the emotions.
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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2013
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Appreciate it. Well described and well written. I could connect to it. Words rhymed very well. The words used for rhyming is such a bliss. The whole piece of poem is wonderful but the stanza that touched is,
"I created light to present My reflection
To chase the dark for your protection
So join me now in gratitude
That you may choose your attitude".
It soothes the emotions.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2013
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Dear Connectadi; thanks so much for your thoughtful review and I'm very delighted that you enjoyed this: HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
