From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "The Face that always loves you"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
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Comment from dennis0530
Mirrors are almost a magical thing. Whimsical question maybe, but does it reflect your image or does your image make it reflect back? - Magic, yes.
Are mirrors reminders that a Creator is staring back at its creation? Nobody and nobody can completely describe what your face is. The mirror says it all in no time. Unless one puts a mask on, a mirror never lies.
It is a mystical thing - that mirrors, even though how small can show your full face. Maybe it s also a divine creation.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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Mirrors are almost a magical thing. Whimsical question maybe, but does it reflect your image or does your image make it reflect back? - Magic, yes.
Are mirrors reminders that a Creator is staring back at its creation? Nobody and nobody can completely describe what your face is. The mirror says it all in no time. Unless one puts a mask on, a mirror never lies.
It is a mystical thing - that mirrors, even though how small can show your full face. Maybe it s also a divine creation.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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Thank you dennis for this excellent reply and review. Great to hear from you! Vance
Comment from royowen
I don't think Anything pleases God more than when our love for Him and His immutable ways is on public display, when we honour Him He will honour us, not that He won't honour us anyway, I loved your poem of devotion Vance, you'll have to share with us your testimony at some later date, well done, articulate poem written in eloquent language with aabb rhyming and rhythm, well done, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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I don't think Anything pleases God more than when our love for Him and His immutable ways is on public display, when we honour Him He will honour us, not that He won't honour us anyway, I loved your poem of devotion Vance, you'll have to share with us your testimony at some later date, well done, articulate poem written in eloquent language with aabb rhyming and rhythm, well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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Thanks so much Roy for this lovely and uplifting review! I'm always delighted to hear from you! Blessings Brother! Vance
Comment from Charmane
This poem made me so happy, as I was feeling a bit low in spirit!Love does bring happiness and it lifts your spirit too!
My soul speaks to me and I listen. It says that I will never be alone for God will always be close to all of his children! Sadness sometimes visit us during very dark hours...but thank GOD, because JOY comes in the morning! I like this poem so...much because it spreads joy and love beyond the grayness!
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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This poem made me so happy, as I was feeling a bit low in spirit!Love does bring happiness and it lifts your spirit too!
My soul speaks to me and I listen. It says that I will never be alone for God will always be close to all of his children! Sadness sometimes visit us during very dark hours...but thank GOD, because JOY comes in the morning! I like this poem so...much because it spreads joy and love beyond the grayness!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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Dear Charmane: I'm so very glad this poem made you happy as that was exactly my mission! Thanks for this lovely review and keep smiling: God Bless you! Vance
Comment from gypsymoth
You did well to remind us we should accept and love the
person in the mirror made in His image.I really think
you words say it all,"Look again in your mirror and see my face." He made us in His spiritual image. Well done.
Gypsymoth
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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You did well to remind us we should accept and love the
person in the mirror made in His image.I really think
you words say it all,"Look again in your mirror and see my face." He made us in His spiritual image. Well done.
Gypsymoth
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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Hi gypsymoth: thank you so very sincerely for your lovely review and I'm delighted to know you enjoyed it. Vance
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
Like a rhythmic dance the beat goes on as ending sentences rhyme in time & alliteration: sails your soul to seas; while the whole poem states the points of truth, I especially like; (And know I planned to meet in this place) the providence & foreknowledge of Him.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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Like a rhythmic dance the beat goes on as ending sentences rhyme in time & alliteration: sails your soul to seas; while the whole poem states the points of truth, I especially like; (And know I planned to meet in this place) the providence & foreknowledge of Him.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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Dear giovannimariatommaso: Thank you for this lovely review and I'm so glad you "caught the vision" and appreciate your very keen and meaningful review! Many thanks again!!! Vance
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Comment from lakeport
the face that always loves you, indeed the mirror does not lie,that's a very heartfelt expressed poem.Nice rhyming I enjoyed reading it, God bless you.lakeport.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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the face that always loves you, indeed the mirror does not lie,that's a very heartfelt expressed poem.Nice rhyming I enjoyed reading it, God bless you.lakeport.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your kind review..it is greatly appreciated:Vance
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your welcome.Lakeport.
Comment from Darkhorse555
from a beautiful little princess a little angel shawled in its soft attire sharing your most precious jewel you penned a beautiful piece
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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from a beautiful little princess a little angel shawled in its soft attire sharing your most precious jewel you penned a beautiful piece
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Thanks so much Darkhorse: it is much appreciated and always glad to see you! Blessings: HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment from ste7e
to begin with , I am an agnostic,so take what I say with a pinch of salt.the first two verses grabbed me.I thought , here we go,got a good one here.thinking it was about a mothers love for her newborn,and the fears and tribulations of beginnings.then you went all fervent and religious,desperately trying to convert us to validate your own beliefs.don't get me wrong on this,if it inspires you or those who believe in deities ,no harm no foul,but it just turns me cold.but even though it bitterly disappointed me after the first two verses, I have still given it my highest rating for religious poetry,a lot better than most.you have talent,keep up the good work.but I won't be an advocate of it.being an eternal realist.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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to begin with , I am an agnostic,so take what I say with a pinch of salt.the first two verses grabbed me.I thought , here we go,got a good one here.thinking it was about a mothers love for her newborn,and the fears and tribulations of beginnings.then you went all fervent and religious,desperately trying to convert us to validate your own beliefs.don't get me wrong on this,if it inspires you or those who believe in deities ,no harm no foul,but it just turns me cold.but even though it bitterly disappointed me after the first two verses, I have still given it my highest rating for religious poetry,a lot better than most.you have talent,keep up the good work.but I won't be an advocate of it.being an eternal realist.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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ste7e: Thanks for your candor and respectful comments about the poetic structure. I respect every human's right (and obligation) to make choices that will guide their lives and I don't judge them for those choices unless they are harmful to others. We all have the right to nominate what makes sense to us. Thanks again for the review: HIS GRAYNESS
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a good even handed honest open reply..thank u .for allowing me to be the same.after all,a review is worthless if it is not honest.I try not to be harmful to those I review,after all what we write is a part of us made manifest,our children so to speak, and to have one spanked by a stranger, no matter how well intended, induces strong protective emotions in us.. thank u for taking the trouble to reply,and reviewing my review,we all need to grow and learn,and we do that by communicating,thanks for ur reply.
Comment from joneau2
A wonderful poem, wonderfully told. You are an excellent craftsman with your words, and the transitions are exceptional. A great job, well done.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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A wonderful poem, wonderfully told. You are an excellent craftsman with your words, and the transitions are exceptional. A great job, well done.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Thank you sincerely Joneau2..I'm so grateful that you enjoyed this poem and I appreciate your kind words. Blessings! HIS GRAYNESS
Comment from Saucey
I appreciated this well written piece. The presentation was so adorable. The words flowed well, sort of aa,bb rhyming scheme. Message, meaningful. Thanks for sharing:)
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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I appreciated this well written piece. The presentation was so adorable. The words flowed well, sort of aa,bb rhyming scheme. Message, meaningful. Thanks for sharing:)
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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THANK YOU Saucey! I'm so delighted that you enjoyed this poem and hope to see you back often. All the best! HIS GRAYNESS
